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for Striking A Deal

by KogasAngel

person Nikki
schedule May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think the treesome would be good~~♥♥♥
person Boocat
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite Sesshomaru & Kagome fan-fictions.
person estelin
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was awesome. i wish there was more. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more of your work.
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was good
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Crysan
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story... nice plot!
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story!!!
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have enjoyed this story thoroughly, your stories are always entertaining. one thing, however, commas are not your friends. a simple rule of thumb is: use a comma where there is a NATURAL pause. the word 'and' is a conjunction so there is no need to put a comma in front of it; to do so is redundant. still, i have argued that point with others and we have been able to provide rules on both sides to support our opposing arguments. isn't enlish fun? and there is really no logic to it: it is such a bastardized language. not only that, but english differs from country to country, Canada, US, Britain, Australia, etc... anyway, i would go with what simplifies writing; your purpose being to communicate your ideas, not demonstrate your expertise in english grammar; you can leave that for language dorks like me.
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you please write a sequel to this story please?