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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! She wasn't playing around when she told me she reviewed for every chapter of this fic. My girl is good. Lol, ::cough:: Anyway, I love this fic and I hope you continue to keep on writing.
Love, Fox
Love, Fox
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. I just tripped over this and had to read it - I really like this. angst-y, lemon-y, poooor poor everyone! Really well written. more, please?
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YESSSSSSSSSS!!! You FINALLY updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON"T TAKE SO LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!!!!!!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I cant wait for ur next update. I love the details in ur story and how amazingly realistic it is.
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have mixed feelings on this one...I guess it's because it's so bizarre.
Not the fic, but Inu's way of thinking. I mean, I get it...but it's insanity
too. The whole Miro, sango, Shippo thing...heartbreaking and I'm hoping
there was some point to it...or was it just used as the catalyst? You've
evoked a rare thing in me...dislike for my hanyou. So I gotta say Great
damn job. But I'm still pretty confused as to exactly where this is going
and how heartbreaking will the road to completion be?
Not the fic, but Inu's way of thinking. I mean, I get it...but it's insanity
too. The whole Miro, sango, Shippo thing...heartbreaking and I'm hoping
there was some point to it...or was it just used as the catalyst? You've
evoked a rare thing in me...dislike for my hanyou. So I gotta say Great
damn job. But I'm still pretty confused as to exactly where this is going
and how heartbreaking will the road to completion be?
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O. M . G. i was crying in the chapter where sango and miro nd shiipou left!!!!! *still crying* poor kagome. inuyashas such a duesche..... cant wait to read more!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need... more...hentai Inuyasha!!! ^-^ I can't see him with many people amazingly. I'm a huge yaoi fan and I only really like him with Kagome. Please write more soon!
~Akira~
~Akira~
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to hunt for this one to see if you had updated, so I'm a little late in reviewing ^_^ I can't remember if I have reviewed before this or not, so forgive any repetition.
Wow! What started out as a playful, fun lemon turned into a story with so much angst I am close to tears by the end of each chapter. Wonderfully written! I feel like my own heart is breaking as I read. It is very rare that I find a story on here that will evoke such powerful emotions. I think you did a beautiful job with Kikyo's death. I know a lot of people hate her, but I've always just felt very sad for her.
I'm not sure what else I can say except keep writing! I hope for a happy ending just to lift the sorrow that surrounds this piece. Meanwhile, I look forward to reading the next chapter!
Wow! What started out as a playful, fun lemon turned into a story with so much angst I am close to tears by the end of each chapter. Wonderfully written! I feel like my own heart is breaking as I read. It is very rare that I find a story on here that will evoke such powerful emotions. I think you did a beautiful job with Kikyo's death. I know a lot of people hate her, but I've always just felt very sad for her.
I'm not sure what else I can say except keep writing! I hope for a happy ending just to lift the sorrow that surrounds this piece. Meanwhile, I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kikyo-well thank you for not making her the villian (I have always thought her tragic and misunderstood) so that made the chap great for me, and it's clear that Kags just doesn't understand that a half demon thinks and feels in ways differnt from a human
good job
good job
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It isn't just the depth of emotion you wring from the characters, it's also the fact that you control circumstance in such a manner that we readers are jerked from one extreme to the other. You get us inside their heads to the point that we can almost know what they are going to think and say even before they think or say it!
Emotional pain is often more scarring than physical pain. You proved that with Miroku, and the decision he made regarding Sango. Here's the thing. InuYasha's got a much stronger constitution than any of the humans, so he can "take it" in a sense a lot longer before succumbing to a nervous breakdown than the others. After a while, I suppose, pain either becomes pleasure, or the person becomes numb to it, or it becomes so excruciating that the percieved relief that comes in ending it all becomes greater than the prospect of continuing to exist. Can't wait to see how you spin us on our heads next.
Your talent is awesome and I give you your props.
W.
Emotional pain is often more scarring than physical pain. You proved that with Miroku, and the decision he made regarding Sango. Here's the thing. InuYasha's got a much stronger constitution than any of the humans, so he can "take it" in a sense a lot longer before succumbing to a nervous breakdown than the others. After a while, I suppose, pain either becomes pleasure, or the person becomes numb to it, or it becomes so excruciating that the percieved relief that comes in ending it all becomes greater than the prospect of continuing to exist. Can't wait to see how you spin us on our heads next.
Your talent is awesome and I give you your props.
W.