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by drake220

person bettychan
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. By the way, you can see the original version of that picture at http://giovannag.deviantart.com/gallery/?type=browse&offset=48 in all its 900x720 glory. . It even has the original artists signature on it. Please don't steal it.
person Seiteki (NSI)
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im really drawn to this story, not really sure why. but its well written and sadly beautiful. please keep it up.
person Tetsuya Yamatashi
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That's really all I can say. Your story just moves me.
I really admire you too, for being able to even continue a story like this while going through such a hard time. I'm not even going to ask for an update, but ask you to take your time in writing and feeling better.
person Dariana
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... that sounds like she might leave. Everything had been too tough for both of them, they are so confused. I hope they'll end up together and happy, that they make things work out. Great chapter! Great lemons!
person Deep Serenity
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so glad you updated, sorry about the break up, they suck.......men suck blah. The story was great and you do a good job telling this twisted tales of dependency. Not being able to let go when you should just becasue somthing is familar. And yes I enjoy the sex too! great story, it has really grown from the intended one shot
person Kid ^_^
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ALSO, just in case you don't update for a while, I HAVE to congratulate you on this awesome quote.

"...he can fuck like a volcano."

^_^ I heart you.
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was drama at its peak. very well done, as always!!!! wow. i feel so bad for Kagome...but she needs to get away from Inu. he can't understand what she wants/desires/needs and in return, though to his proclaimed innocence, is holding her back. damn. talk about a catch 22. what do you do? eep! great, as always!!!! keep it up!!!!
person Lynn
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi again!

Nice chapter. Your story is still one of best fanfictions aruond here and also one favourite of mine. I was waiting for this update, and it was worth it. It made me think about the classic "what will Kagome do when the quest is done" from a new perspective. And it also made me think about myself and my own life a bit...

Thank you for writing this story.

Lynn
person Kid ^_^
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, you're fantastic! This was brilliant! Oh, dear...I'm sorry for your loss. It must be hard... Well, kudos to you for making a beautiful chapter despite that. I love this fic. Doesn't everbody? ^_^

Hope "real life" doesn't bring you much more unpleasantries....and I hope it does give you wonderful insipring writing ideas. :D
person Kid ^_^
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I LOVED Kagome's character in this chapter. I mean, the depression! The helplessness! All the emotions and espressions!!! ^^ And I agree with Lynn on how this is like what will happen at the end of the journey with a new perspective. This Is actually quite different... (Well done! :D ^_^)