rate_review Reviews

You did a fantastic job from my opinnion with this chapter, i can understand why it was hard to write and why it took so long... hell, i could never write something like this, never, which only proves you have a talent that is rare and amazing. Growing up... it truly is painful, i should know.

Now, i can't wait to see what you up for us next, or this emotional rollercoaster fic will come to an end... i hope to find out soon!

Hey, I really liked your story and how you were able to explain how the characters got to the strange place they are now. I really want to see how it turns out!

this story is amazing! I hope you are able to update soon!

(put me on your list)-Sorry I didn't review sooner just read and I think THIS chapter may be the best so far, in drawing the reader in. It was emotional and I loved it! It was deep and true to real life(you know I adore realistic stuff) great work, keep it up!

that was really awesome!

mmm. the plot thickens. i didn't see the suicide attempt coming. the old man is a bit of a "deus ex machina," but then again i guess we all need a little divine-like intervention once in a while... especially in crisis situations. (unless, of course, the old man will turn out to be something more in future chapters?... ;) I'm glad Kagome's mom talked some sense into her... I hope Inuyasha gets some sense knocked into him too... and I hope you're feeling better after the breakup and everything.

oh, and i especially like the "Are you a better person?" test you've suggested. i KNOW i can't ever give up fanfic when i'm always learning so much from it! thanks for another great chapter!

great story send updates

Hi there!

I've been reading this story from the very first chapter and ever since then, it amazed me. Your lemons are really good and enjoyable, and the plot is even better. I think that you are a really good writer and this work is real treasure.
Only question: will they break up or make up?

Cannot wait for the next update. Please try to make it soon! Pretty please!
And also send me an email when it's done, please.

Thank you!

Lynn

Wow ... i never imagined i would want inu and kag to break up ... bu there it is ... what an absolutely horrific relationship they have. I believe it takes true skill to make an inu/kag shipper happy that their relationship is heading down the toilet. Its just so odd since i find myself wondering how they got to this point, since it seems like at first they both wanted the same thing. I find the character development to be quite believable though. Good job, good story, depressing as hell, but, you know, good. Put me on the email list for when the next chapter comes out.

oh, in case the email doesnt show up for whatever reason, my email address is onna_no_fluffy@yahoo.com. Thanx!