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by drake220

person Anon
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait... so you read chapter 2 first? then chapter 1?
person Steffi
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more! thats all I have to say.
person blossom
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this story was so good could you maybe keep on writing more he he he
person catt
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD THAT TOTALLY ROCKED!!!!!!^_^
person sexykagome03
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFg, that was totally hot! You defenintley have to update!!!!!!
person Kellie
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is DAMN! That is one hot lemon scene. I like it. Please continue ^__^
person Meli-chan
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*reads chapter 2* Phew... O_O; *fans self with fan* That second chapter...was...well, I'm just going to come out & say it: It was REALLY, REALLY HOT! xD You're really good at lemon scenes, you should do more InuKag stories ^_^ Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm off to take a cold shower... XDD
person InusGood Girl
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way to go... I thik this chapter was great! I felt that everything was going right.... I hope to see more soon, and thank you for reviewing... I love to read my readers stories, but if is okay with you I would like to reffer people to your story... so just e-mail me, or write a quick note and I will put it up.
Later,
Flare
person Nim
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good but that still doesn't explain how Inu come about wearing leather.
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Can't wait for more from you.