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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I... honestly hope you'll update this soon, i hope Inu and Kagome can somehow work this out... it's a good fic, hopefully not too angsty.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a REALLY good plot for this story... im just wondering how they're going to say they love eachother. good way to end chapter 3 with those flashbacks of affecting sentences. quite sad how they're just screwing around with eachother... but for now it will do
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I had read this as the one-shot, which was good, by the way. But when I saw that you had expanded it, I had to see where you took things. For it "only" being a one-shot initially, the plot line so far is amazing. sexy, erotic, and definitely in character. Rough, hot, steamy, angsty...I'm sooooo looking forward to more!
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well this story ok but what inuyasha did to kagome was not right in my eye. but what made my heart hurt that kagome didnt want the love from inuyasha. that my thoughts of the 3rd chapter but the 1st and 2nd great and writen vary well. am deeply sorry for review but I wanted to voice my thought sense am a Inuyasha fan. well you have my email if you want to rip, yell, or tell me off your welcome to do so.
P.s. dont take what I said suessly. and I would like to take to you if that cool with you *feeling bad for what I said*
P.s. dont take what I said suessly. and I would like to take to you if that cool with you *feeling bad for what I said*
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOO SEXY!!!!!!!!!! PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PS EMAIL ME IF YOU CAN THANKS!!!!
PS EMAIL ME IF YOU CAN THANKS!!!!
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT CHAPTER WAS SO HOT!!! I loved it!!!But.... SOBS!!!! How could he do that? oh my god. He the way he said that. It was so cold. Poor kagome...I love your chapters dont get me wrong, that was just so sad at the end. Please tell me it works out!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute :)
A bit out of character, maybe? Ah well, what love does to people :)
A bit out of character, maybe? Ah well, what love does to people :)
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
jesus what r u trying to do...omg i almost went right along with those two ;-) i absolutely loved that. i mean damn i could feel every little thing they did. wow ur writing is amazing,way better than mine. i do hope u take it to the next level or even make another. wonderful work indeed...i shall await more from you
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm well that was written really well and i love how you set everything up in the first chapter and then really let loose with the second.
nice nice nice job!
*Silent Writer*
Thank you for your reviews on 'Painting a Straight Line'
nice nice nice job!
*Silent Writer*
Thank you for your reviews on 'Painting a Straight Line'
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! Woot woot. I personally think you're REALLY REALLY good at writing lemons, buuuuuuuut that's just me. I hope you update this, it's REALLY good.