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by drake220

person Anon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! I'm so glad u updated!!! I thought u forgot about the story!!! Please update soon...u r so evil leaving it cliffy...I wanna know whats gonna happen with Iy and Kags!!!!!!!!
person Lord Folken
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story I cryed when every one laft and shippos note he laft Kagome and Inuyasha. I hop he comes back
pls update soon I want to know what happens next.............
person tetsuyayamatashi
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!! I love this story so much! I am so glad that you wrote this!
I was also wondering if I could post this story on my site, It will be under your name and all of that copywrite stuff. I just want to host a link to it. Email me back when you get the chance, please.

On other note I wamt to say to anyone reading these reviews, an awsome song to listen to while reading this chapter, is 'Untitled' by simple plan. It sets the mood wonderfully.
person Akira
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No!! Cliffhanger! Keep writing I want to see what happens next! Great story!

~Akira Vadel~
person EvilKittenn (not logged in)
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GEEZE OH PEETS!!! Drama much? *smiles* As usual, I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope that this "insurance" will be some damn good insurance. *looks around* can I get this insurance?? *grins* Kepp up the good work and as for the OOC issues... its your story, if you want them like that, fuck everyone else. I think it's great the way it is!
person swasdiva
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Thanks for reviewing the uh, description of my fic! I had no choice but to check out yours, and while I don't have time to finish it entirely, what I read was probably some of the hottest, most raw and tantalizing smutty-smutt-smut I've ever had the pleasure of reading. What's even better is that you actually have distinct writing talent, and your lemon doesn't get lost in clunky description. Your strong narrative style definitely ups the 'Great-now-I'm-horny-as-hell' factor. Fabulous stuff!
person aleaha
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear God, is this ever going to get any lighter...how much more sadness will come before the happy ending if thats even possible now....I think I must have cried threw the whole thing...everyone when crazy its like Naraku's dream come true or something...it would be nice if it was all someone's really bad dream in the end. Well any way until next time (do you cry when your writting this)
person DelKaidin
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually drake... I liked Inuyasha in this chapter. There is a reason he's the leader of the group ... and I believe he takes the role people expect him to which indicates a greater intelligence than most give him. Will be interesting to see what you have planned next. Great story!
person Kaitsu
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good! keep updating please! I wanted to cry!!!!!!!
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent! several points
1. you had me laughing with miroku's blow ups(I have a sick sense of humor, plus it was plan funny)

2. I want to thank you for making inuyasha smart! I believe he is and portray him like that in my stories also, and like you said he didn't survive for nothing.

3. can totally see way miroku was angry, men's ego's are so fragile and for them to treat him like that, well, I got it

4. THANK you for being realistic!(mostly) I enjoy story far more when then make sense and I think everyone was just right for the plot around them, good job and will be waiting for more!