rate_review Reviews

Thank god i always save the stories i like in my computer or i would have missed the lovely epilogue. Het it's your story do can do anything you like and if all stories ended the same way then how would your's be different to toher's. everyone have their own views and removing a chapter due to one flame is not very wise. I think almost every writer faces a flame once or twice in her/his lifetime and it's the proof that you are doing good work (atleast i think that). So someone has a different opinion of your stroy and decided to voice her/his discomfort So? Look at the ones who have the same opnion. they are much more in number than your ONE flamer. Will it be fair to them? Just think about it for once.

Firstly, I liked your story. It was an interesting, if not a bit unconventional, read. I thought it was well written and wonderfully dramatic. I did think that the epilogue was a bit strange considering the relationship you had created between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru, but it worked in its own way. (I'm not a big fan of mpreg either.) Besides, I believe in a writer's right to write whatever they feel like writing. All we as readers can do is bitch about the results.

However, I thought your removal of the epilogue was a bit hypocritical. You stated that you should first write for yourself, then the masses. Wasn't removing the epilogue bowing to your flamer? If you truly wrote for yourself, and you were happy with the epilogue, then leave it as is. I hate to sound harsh or like an insufferable know-it-all, but negative criticism is apart of being a writer. People will misunderstand you. People will say mean things. People have different tastes, and you won't always be considered a delicacy. That's something you are going to have to face, not just in writing, but in life in general. All you can do is stick it to the stupid people who don't get you and trudge on. Don't let a flame make you change something just because they got you angry. If you want to write yaoi, do it. If you don't, then don't. Be as bold as you said you were and leave it. Like you said, what's important is how you feel about it. Act that. Live that. Be that. Keep writing.

I'm sorry if I have offended you, but it would be a shame to see a decent writer go to waste in such a fashion.

I have to tell you that I love this story. First time yaoi no way. Your lemon scenes were so hot and tasteful. Not a combination you see alot of. I am very disappointed you removed your epilogue. I'm afraid I wasn't quick enough to read it before it was removed. Perhaps if you could send it to me. Let me just say this in closing. If that epilogue was the way you envisioned this fic ending than screw anyone elses opinion (unless they pay you obscene amounts of money to change it). OK maybe not even then. Please keep writing yaoi I did enjoy it so much. I've added you to my Authors to watch.

I enjoy this story very much I hope you will continue with it.

Summer

I loved INU and SESSHY but I did not like the end.
INU/SESSHY forever.

Inuyasha mated Kagome!? How wonderful! NOT! I hate that bitch Kagome! That sutpid whiny whore! She good for nothinig (well for looking for jewel shares but youg et what i'm saying here) stupid junior high student! With the 'sit' commaned! Gods i hate her and now i hate your story too!(though it was very good at the beganing) And don't ask me why, i do not want to anwser and you do not want to know why!

Well, this was an excellent story!! Dont stop writing yaoi just cuz of some jackass. You're a great writer!!!!

AND IM GLAD THAT SESSHY CAME BACK TO LIFE!!! EEEEE!!!

OK, I admit that I haven't even read your story...yet. Just the 'Epilogue removed' thing caught my eyes, so that's why I read the reviews first, and then writing this right now.
I do hope that you didn't remove the epilogue in question because of somebody who cannot even spell or write decent sentences.
Now I'm off to reading your fiction. I'll let you know what I think of it once I finish reading.

Wow it just gets more and more intense O__________O