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OH NO! Inuyasha's gonea get it now. Will Sesshomaru and Inuyasha Mate? Is Rin and Shippo in this story?

YES. MAKE INUYASHA SAY YES.

I believe this is the second time I have read this, and I loved it as much as I loved it the first time. To tell you the truth I liked the first ending that you did, since it made sense to have it end that way. Now I am not a hetero fan at all, but to tell you the truth I liked how you ended it the first time because it was beautiful in the sense that they found out about the truth of their love, and still had the mates they were required to have, but still had each other in the sense of brotherly love mixed with the few hours they would spend together in abandon. Course I love the second ending as well because I am a sucker for Inu/Sessy but I think the first one worked better especially considering the situation with Kagome... but I like the alternate ending you posted as well. Very well done I must say.

Hey, I'm a Spanish reader of your work. I wanted to say that, although the change you did was surprising, taking into consideration the earlier chapters, I don't think the entire fic was spoiled by it, it only made the fic more unique, I believe. And, by the way, you really have talent, I sincerely wish you (and I'm pretty sure about it will happen) a great future as a serious writer.
ps: I have only been studying English for a very short time, but I hope I have explained myself enough clearly.
Reading your work

VenusOfHeaven (also called Davinci)

PS 2: I f you someday want to publish a fic in Spanish and you need anyone to correct your grammar mistakes, I'll be glad. Perhaps I'm not good at English, but I Know Spanish grammar rules, you know. ^_~

Thank you so much or writing this wonderful story!! I really enjoyed it and I'm ooking forward to reading more of your work!!

.... I can't say that I loved the ending. Yes I did catch the hints and all that. I just wish that they stayed together instead of taking mates. For some reason Kagome just didn't seem right for Inuyasha, I would've excepted a different mate. She just didn't make me say "yes". And I guess I was hoping along with so many others that Sesshou and Inu would become mates themselves. I guess my dream died away. It was my own yaoi fantasy for those two to stay to gether and not take on any mates. I know that they are, or do still have some type of bond and all, I just wish that bond was shared as mates. Oh well. The ending besides my little disapointments was really good. I did enjoy the story and the plot, although I must be honest, I thought this story was more of the.. PWP. Lol, but it wasn't and it was really awesome. Awesome work and please don't get mad!! I'm just one who wishes things were different but is still pretty happy with the way it turned out. Minus the kags part ^.^'. lol. But that's it. Again loved the story and oh so much more! Later.

Lovely. I enjoyed it.

I see nothing wrong with this ending, saia...foolish reviewers need a life....blows kisses and slaps her ass to all reviewers.....my love for you and your writing is never ending....can I say that without embarrassing you?....oh well going to say it anyway....catti.....

"Brothers" is one of my favorite Sess-Inu stories... I absolutely love it for, as I said in my earlier review, the sensual/spiritual tone. One thing did nag at me, however, about the ending: I would have liked one last conversation between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. After all the talking they did (amongst the lovin' of course) throughout the story, I didn't expect the ending to be all narration. Don't get me wrong--I didn't dislike the final chapter by any means, but I just wanted a little more closure out of it. Maybe I'm being too picky, but I wanted to let you know what I thought so you can consider it (and scoff if you think I'm nuts). Thank you for writing and posting this work, and I hope to read more from you in the future!

Hey, i couldn't see anything wrong with the ending. it was very well done. although i hate story
that make cry like when Sessy realize the horrendous things he did to Inuyasha and died of a
broken heart. i must admitted it had me in tears. not many stories no or days are done
so tastefully. and do not worry yourself about those who did not like your ending. i think you
were right to end it like that. all i can say is well done and keep writing. like you i too wants
to be a pro writer as well and understand the benfits of constructive critiques. all i can say is
again i saw nothing wrong from the beginning to the end.