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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful poem! Really sweet and touching.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Short and to the point like me. I think you did a lovely job. I agree with the other reviewer, if it was made to be longer, it would have been forced!!
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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii poem.... I liked it a lot... The poem kinda reminded me of the situation I'm in right now... I really liked it a lot... Nice job, you deserve it.
TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about it being short...I have a feeling if you'd tried to flesh it out more, this would've come across as forced, and that would've ruined the effect. Nice work.
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww that's soo sad. :-( That was good. ^^'
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really sad. It was really good tho i loved the poem!!