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ooh Sabi this is such a great fic I sooooooo luv it you must continue please??? great writing and great beginning so far, totally loved the four chaps, now if only I can get ya to write four new ones..*grin* again please update great fic cant wait for more and if ya can email me cool but if not will check back for updates, ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

o my fucking god--- stab.stab.stab.stab// sob

Oooh, this is a great story. It's hard to tell what will become if it since the plot hasn't really started yet from what I assume, but it sparked my interest. Black-haired Inuyasha isn't my favourite form but I think I can manage ;) Kagome's family seems a bit stressed but they are doing okay. Keiko is really cute, although I know that all children are little menaces at that age. Hopefully Inu-papa will get a stable job soon, and maybe a little romance with a certain cute mother-of-two across the hall, uhm? :D
Keep up the good work
/Zmyrra

can i just say that those two are each so dense, you could bounce a china plate off their heads...seriosuly, i mean, its not that hard to figure out that a- kag's kay's mom and 2- because he just called her pretty! yeeshh... love the story though. really interesting read!

Awww... I love this story. It's adorable! I think it's awesome that you're making Kagome the mother for once. I think the characterization is pretty good, as far as the plot can stretch for it. The chapters are an excellent length. Very good grammar. I really like this story. You have talent. I'll definitely be keeping my eyes peeled for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work, and good luck with the next chapter.

P.S. I also got an awesome visual of Inuyasha flying back from the impact of his sneeze. Giggle-worthy.