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for Kizu

by Murasaki

person blacka
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are such a great writer. I love the way you describe everything it so... so i don't know, raw? pure in esence. But i absolutly love it, I really enjoy reading your stories.
Update soon! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...i love this story, it's not too gory at all..just perfect. CONTINUE!!!
person le bleu de le foret
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! great story... for like 4 chapters i was getting vibes that Fujita was lesbian though... haha! the whole whispering how one couldn't love with the whole sniffing thing... and that before battle deal... sweet chapter, update asap!

-the blue of the forest-
person JeSsI
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think that the way you described the battle scene was perfectly fine
your writting is very entertaining and i wish u the best of luck with the next chapter
i know u wont disappoint me!!
update soon
person Duke Of Spades
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really why?? i'm just a humble fan who reviews stories that i deem worthy! ^______^' Yeah anyway i love this story..! sesshy was a little bit out of character but it kinda worked! Are we getting to the romance in the story?? What are sesshy's feelings towards kagome?? how stupid could she be! and i thought the gore graphics were great!! keep them in it it seems more real if you have it! Ok ta Update!!!
person sesshouchick
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn cutting off all those heads I would have lost it too! Excellent chapter so what's going to happen next? Willkagome continue to resent Sesshoumaru or will she forgive and become the killer that she is being pressured to become?

I can't wait for the next chapter Keep up the good work
person Paris
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you have proved your self all over again as a writer. Wow. Simply amazing!! I do enjoy all of your scenes! hehe. The description of Sesshoumaru and his punishment to Kagome was just breathtakingly beautiful-- it just seemed alive to me. And afterwards at the banquet, as well as the final scene of him rocking her, aww. Was that compassion and possibly sympathy for another being that he was showing?! Wowzers! After I get done writing this I'll head on over to mm.org and add ya there! Well, keep up the amazing work, and happy holiday! PS-- hope to hear more from you very very soon! ---Paris
person trish
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far!!!!!! Please keep going!!
person sesshouchick
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story you have any amazing way of speaking the visualization, and the last chapter was brutal I can't wait for more this has to be the best Kag/Sess Fic I have read in a very long time. And what's with Fujita is she a lesbian or what?
person Paris
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is amazing. I just started reading it. You have something very wonderful going on here and I hope that you realize that and can see just how great this story really is. Never doubt the quality of your work; trust me, it it wasn't amazing, I wouldn't be reading it. As for the cold weather. Yuck! Move somewhere warm! hehehe. I know that I will be doing so in the near future. I just can't stand cold winters. But back to the story. The story seems to flow with such grace! Will Sesshoumaru find out just exactly who Kagome is anytime soon? And how will he react? Yes, I realize that I always ask things to which authors usually reply: time will tell. hehehe, but I'm just being curious. Onec again, keep up the amazing work. I hope to read more from you very soon! PS-- is this story on Mediaminer.org? If so I'll add it to my favorites list, hehe. ---Paris