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for Kizu

by Murasaki

person DarkMystic
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I wanted to tell you that I love this fic, it is very well written, and has alot of thought put into it...But, I cant help but feel throughly sad for Kagome, it seems as if she will never find love, yet at the end of the last chapter Naraku, the one that killed her first love would maybe be a better choice then Sesshoumaru, I mean, maybe he wont beat her as much yah think? *Sighs.* Im just confused, I hope Kagome figures herself out soon, and finds her happy ending in the end. Happy writing, and update soon, im excited to know what happens next.
person duke of spades
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eLLLO THanks for the emails!! i found ye!!!! ^_______^!!! it such a great chapter!!!! man i feel for kagome.... so sad!! i'm about to cry T_T too late! my baby naraku he's crying???!! why??! must update!!! as you see i'm very addicted!! ^_^ thanks for calling me one of your favorite reviewers!!! i always try to be extra ordinary!!! ^____^!! i'm so glad i'm like in the fanfiction world i have been a dedicated fan for about 2 years... such a long time ago.... yet i still have not written my own fanfic (i'm a terrible writer! just look at me poor grammer and my very bad speller IM NEVER GOING TO GET INTO COLLEGE!! T_T) BUT I LOVE TO READ THEM !! and i love reading yours!!!! ta i have said too much!!!
person YoukaiCiara
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... Was that all planned? Fujita did that on purpose, I swear. Anyways, good story. Keep on updating!
person sessharu
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i realy like your fanfic
but i dont get the 10th ch.
i mean what does kagome mean when she says his 1st betrale
i love it keep going ^O^
person Demonic Yoshii
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SOO NICE OF YOU SENDING ME THAT E-MAIL. I was bored to death and this is such a great story. I feel all bad for Kagome, poor thing has gone through so much and when she tries to help her few friends she get's shunned and abused. I really hope something good will happen to her soon but none the less great job, keep up the great work, cause my addiction wont allow you to stop hehehe :)
person sesshouchick
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So is fujita pregnant with sesshou's baby? I don't get it I'm kinda lost hopefully the next chapter will help me understand I eagerly await the next update.
person morgan
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love your fic. Please update as soon as you can. Can't wait for more chappies ^_^
person Koorime13
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the greatest stories I've ever read. Please, I beg of you, continue this story asap and quench my readlust for this very addicting and utterly wonderful story that you have concocted and written with such tallent, knowledge and use of words. I hope that my encouragement and honesty will want you to write soon. This is a very touching story, especialy the last chapter. I really felt it, the pain, loss and longing, you do want your readers to feel your story and I am 4-ever greatful to have read such.

Ja ne.
person Koorime13
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What are you talking about!!! This chapter was almost anything but boring. I really like your style of writing and use of words, makes your story seem very "magical" yet realistic and most certainly wonderful.
person demonic yoshii
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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