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for Tears of Morning

by nelliegirl

person Amunet
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn you have to update! QUICKLY! I adore this story!
person MySecretsOut
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was simply amazing! your story is just so dang rad and I hope that you update again soon because I just have to know what happen! this is really well written (is that proper grammar?) anyways awesome job!!!
person Mija
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oow wow three great chaps or was it two??? I forgot lol got so caught up in your story I just plain forgot lol, great work I soo love this fic..and its hojo right??? hes romeo???? ok ok I will wait to find out but noooooooo he cant hurt Rin, where is Sesshy when she needs him??? dang that man...will Romeo get her??? cant wait to find out hope to read an update soon, your doing great and I really enjoy reading this fic ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person MySecretsOut
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHH!!! No...there's just gotta be more! I need to know what the heck happens! Awesome job! till next time cheers!
person szmadad
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More...more...more...Inu-Kag!
I can't believe Inu has avoided Kag for so many years! How do you end up doing that to a good friend...as you seemed to indicate they had become? Especially after something so traumatizing occurred at Kag's home?
And as for who this creep is...interesting...Naraku? Houjo? Hiten? Some wild card who we don't know about just yet?
person ME...
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter. Man, this killer is a psycho. I really don't see her getting over this soon. Or wanting a boyfriend. I think it'd be kinda interesting to see some of Inuyasha and Kagome's past (like maybe in flashbacks). Where did the killer guy get the police gun? Did he get it from his dad (you said earlier that he was a cop), or did the killer go into the famly business? Also, are you going to include how Miroku knows everyone? Well, again... excellent job. Your story is terrific. I haven't read an Inuyasha Fanfiction as original as this. Can't wait? Oh, yes... can't help asking... will there be lemon in future chapters? Either way I'll continue to read the story. Good luck, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
person Mija
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh I dont see how this fic hasnt gotten more reviews unless its totally new and I just stumbled on it lol, but I have to tell ya its very very original and soo damn intresting I cant get enough I truely hope you update soon and aside for some grammer mistakes and such its totally awsome but then again mine is filled with major mistakes lol, but please please update soon k??? hve to know who it is, Koga?? nope blue not brown eyes...soooooooo Hojo??? no one would suspect him hehe or Naraku himself??? hmmmm lots to choose from well sort of lol any how please update if ya can please give me an emial update k?/ if not will check back so no worries but dont leave this hanging k??? ty ty ty ty much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person MySecretsOut
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very intriguing...hm...I think Romeo is either Hojo or Sesshomaru, I may be totally off but anyways your story is RAD! I love it and I hope you update soon! till next time cheers!
person ME...
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far! I'm putting every little detail into my head and remembering it. This is such an original story... you should be proud. The chapters are a good length too. I'll write you a better review for then next chapter. I have to be off to class now.
person szmadad
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! You have the beginning of a really creepy but interesting story. And you really set the characters and the scenes up quite well - good detail and atmosphere. I'm curious about where you're going with this. Seems like a serial killer has Kagome has his inspiration for some hideous crimes...though I can't say I'm sorry to see Kikyou go! I do hope you leave Inu-Kag intact and don't have them break up or have him killed off. I'm absolutely obsessed with the rightness of Inu-Kag as a couple. Hmmm...wonder who the serial killer is...could it be Houjo???

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Please do update. I know that aff.net has been having weirdness with connections...so don't give up if people seem to have a hard time finding your story!