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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Tis so cute and not overly/unneccesary smut involved in it like some others due. Tis simply and sweet, with the right combination of tension and twists. One of the best stories ever to be graved by my eyes. Just can't wait until you update it! Looking forward to other chaps and stories by you, of course. Keep up the good work!
Ciao, ja ne, and all that jazz{v}
Ciao, ja ne, and all that jazz{v}
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Loved every sentence of this so far! Plz continue!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love this fic. especially with the way everything is going..please hurry and finish with the other chapters PLEASE!!!!
everything about the fic. is perfect. there is like nothing wrong with it. but yeah please do the rest of the chapters.
later
~Elizabeth~
everything about the fic. is perfect. there is like nothing wrong with it. but yeah please do the rest of the chapters.
later
~Elizabeth~
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh =P PLEASE UPDATE! wow i almost thought inu-yasha was going to take advantasge of kagome1 i really hoped not! plz update soon and i jus love this story dying to read more can't live without it =D
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story but in the future when you "edit" instead of adding a whole new chapter maybe you should put it in the summary or something to let us know. the fact that you story has won an award is great but asking for votes in the summary? and then when you 'edit' the story and we don't know "some" people will think you are "pushing" your story. Alot of us readers DO look past the front page for stories you know.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see that fallenangel7583 has already beaten me to it, but no worries. lol! If you ever need a second opinion for your story (a second beta reader), I would be honored to be her. Ah, I see you've edited your last chapter- InuYasha, InuYasha, InuYasha...the guy does some of the most unusual things...I'm shocked Kagome didn't wake up while he was doing it!
Still number one on my list!
Oh, and I agree with fallenangel7583- this Anon person has also insulted me for my story jumping up on the front page, when I had updated it that same day! I believe this person is just a downer who enjoys picking on other people (And he/she really is really a poor reviewer- sentences are not conducted correctly, poor grammer, juvenile language.) Do what everyone else does when this person flames their story- ignore them! No one seems to care much about Anon's opinion anyway, from what I've noticed...
You have a wonderful story here! Don't let any petty words tell youy otherwise! And do update as soon as you possibly can. I'm anticipating the next chapter to this thrilling tale of seduction!
Until your next chapter...
Adios!
Chow for now,
Liz (Bethy-kun)
Still number one on my list!
Oh, and I agree with fallenangel7583- this Anon person has also insulted me for my story jumping up on the front page, when I had updated it that same day! I believe this person is just a downer who enjoys picking on other people (And he/she really is really a poor reviewer- sentences are not conducted correctly, poor grammer, juvenile language.) Do what everyone else does when this person flames their story- ignore them! No one seems to care much about Anon's opinion anyway, from what I've noticed...
You have a wonderful story here! Don't let any petty words tell youy otherwise! And do update as soon as you possibly can. I'm anticipating the next chapter to this thrilling tale of seduction!
Until your next chapter...
Adios!
Chow for now,
Liz (Bethy-kun)
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for posting the rest of the chapter. The story is awesome!
I agree completely with fallenangel7583. When I read the review from Anon I was both shocked and amused. Shocked because I can't fathom how someone could attack you so personally over something so petty and amused that they were so worked up over it. After reading the review from fallenangel7583 I was laughing my ass off. I am glad that someone shared my opinion and was able to state it with not only humor but intellect as well.
Good luck with the next chapter, I can't wait!
I agree completely with fallenangel7583. When I read the review from Anon I was both shocked and amused. Shocked because I can't fathom how someone could attack you so personally over something so petty and amused that they were so worked up over it. After reading the review from fallenangel7583 I was laughing my ass off. I am glad that someone shared my opinion and was able to state it with not only humor but intellect as well.
Good luck with the next chapter, I can't wait!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SUCH A PLAGIARIST, YOU STOLE SCENTED CANDLES' WORK. STOP IT ALREADY!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seems like you put a lot of time into your stories and your so nice to your reviewers. Really good story. Damn you are a good writer! (many many mnay more compilments) Buh-bye.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_o i don't believe that he was....and she was....and...oh no....O_O wow. jerking off to a sleeping girl...that's just...wow. LMAO. very well done. ^_^;; holy hell. i really can't forumlate words on this. yes, most definiatly, the html cut out that last section. wow!!! great chapter and i can't wait to see the next. on a side note, if you want someone to look over a chapter for you, i can do so. (it would be a switch of rolls) :-) i'm always online with my free time and just having another set of eyes is good. :-) great chapter, can't wait to read the rest!!)