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HOW can THIS fic be NOMINATED for BEST LEMON when there is NO FUCKING LEMON?!?!?!?!?!?????????

hurry up and put the next chappy

that was great...plzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pure genius as always!!!! keep itz up yay!!

I LOVE IT!!!!!Its so well put together! UPDATE ASAP!!!! plz
-NOBODY_BUT_ME

Wow.. you've got quite a lot of talent, ne? I never thought that this story would develop into something so intense and amazing as it is.. keep it up! OooOooOooo... I love it!! Keep the updates comin', please, if you can. I look forward to the next installment, thanks a ton! And hmm.. it seems as tho Inuyasha and Kikyou have different perspectives on what happened between them? interesting...

Pros: I love the fact that this is an original story, and you've craftily used our favourite characters in Inuyasha to weave a story from it - it's simply brilliant! What keeps me reading is the unpredictability of the story - I can't guess how it's going to unfold.

Even the lime scenes are excellent because, not only do they sizzle - they occur so suddenly, they sweep me off my feet, leaving me gasping for breath because I didn't see it coming. I love it that these scenes ooze passion and sensuality... simply HOT HOT HOT! At this point, I don't care even if there are no lemons, because things are already heated up. Of course, you'll *eventually* have to satisfy your readers... by giving them a little more sweet lemoniness.... ;) But right now, I'm perfectly happy to do without, and just bask in the gripping originality of the plot.

Cons: Some grammatical errors, but nothing to severe. Still, it would be a good idea to get someone to edit with a fine tooth comb, to get an air tight article across. It's been top notch in terms of plot, and would be a pity to leave tiny snitches in the beautiful weave.

Do keep writing, this has been excellent... I'm gonna read ch 4 now!

PLEASE put me on you email list, I can't wait for another chapter. I loved reading your work, had a hard time stopping at any time. I usually don't like the modern day Inuyasha stories, but I got hooked on yours right away, it's very well written. Some authors are so bad, I can't go on even reading the story with all the mispellings and bad grammar, it's too distracting. To me the sign of a good author is you don't even think about reading, your just engulfed in the story without even thinking about it, and that's what your story is to me. Thanks so much, have no idea why anyone would bitch about anything you've done, but sometimes I think peeps have nothing better to do. Anyway, can't wait for Inu to really fall for her, and them to consumate :). I would love for him to become reformed and not want any other girl but her :), but that's my personal bias. The one thing, she doesn't seem that hard to get to me, every time he touches her she melts like butter, and he can land her anytime, isn't that like every other girl he's been with? At least she does come to her sense occasionally and shoves him out the door or something. I'd like to see him have to win her heart, prove himself, but maybe that's what you have in mind, she can't help the attraction, but won't give her heart unless it's safe to? Anyway, wonderful job, love it :)

Do you know how long I've waited for this chapter?!? Loooooong! XD And I must say, it's bloody brilliant. I heart everything about it. Keep up the fanta-bulous work! ^^

Kiki AKA Kinkeh XD (Don't ask. Will review some more for the next chapter. <3)