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for The Seduction Game

by XYZ

person eccii
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i remember i read some of this story not too far back adna bsolutely loved it. i ended up forgetting were i found it.
.but now i have found it once again! ^_^ i jsut LOVE the newchaps and hope u willupdate soon!! THANK YOOOOU!!! =P
person AAR
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOO! I can't wait for the next chapter...><

I'm one of your like fan roadies person...except I don't stalk you or follow you around. I just write...alot. ANYWAYS, I'm still amazed at your work. Just keep it yourself happy and don't force yourself to come up with stuff...true people will wait not be waitd on.

AAR
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool. =D
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool. =D
person honeybee
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhh... i love you so much. this story is so fascinating. i can't wait to see how everything develops. nice cliffy by the way. i don't konw you but i am proud of you because to be able to write something like this is a true gift. thank you and please update soon :)
person Nicole
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter. I liked how they are starting to get emotionally attatched not just physically although that makes for interesting situations;) Keep up the good work.
person Neogenevieve
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a very good writer, you know? Please, don't quit with the story. The content and style of your story tops everyone else's as of current.
person XiaoYun
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED YOUR STORY SOOOOO MUCHHHH...PLS PLS PLS UPDATE SOON!!!!

P.S.I'd also like to be placed on your update list.
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you have to love the effect of parents in these fics. (^-^) Another very well written chapter, I'm quite smitten with your work I guess you could say! I love how the plot just took a bit of a thickening turn, it's so mysterious and full of sheer allure; the plot's just developing so nicely, not too fast and nor is it so long, tedious, and slow. Well done!!!! I definitely had a good laugh at parts in this chapter, it's always good to mix up the humor with the romance and angst. I absolutely love it! (^.~) I will re-iterate, you definitely have a true artistic and creative talent with words.

Don't worry about editing so much, it's all about author development and how you think you should improve; if you think it needs work, go for it! Yes, it is kind of stupid that aff.net takes a simple edit as an update ... but that's why you check the chapter tally just below the summary. haha. Why thank you, everyone says that's why I graduated high school with an English scholarship ... hee. I suppose I'll post something on here, I'll just have to whip up a new fic, one that'll surpass the others ones I've written (They seem a bit amateur-ish at the moment ...).

Anyway, again, another job well done. I am absolutely loving this fic, it's one of those that I just can't get enough of! (But don't worry about long updating times, it's all about getting it right, right? ^.~ ) Keep up the awesome work; I'm totally anxious for the next chapter!!!!

`Claire*

person amber
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz add another chappie....this is the best story i haf ever read ao far UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE