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for The Seduction Game

by XYZ

person Chokoreto
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAHHH....i absolutely LOVE IT! =DDD juss...i didnt like the lemon between inu/yura......hahas he's gone SO rough....but at the end....yura is so stupid when she juss figured it out....i want kagome to beat the crap out of inuyasha! hhahahs he needs a lesson about women! anywas PLEASEEE UPDATE!
person katt_jam
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and I'm going to refer this to a friend who always checks out the list of must read stories I give her. Perfect length for the chapters too I love long chapters but not too long that they start to put me to sleep. Please update this really soon I'm begging you.
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love this fic! Please continue! I can't wait to see how houjo is involved in all this. Do you have any other pairings in mind beside the usual? Update soon!!
person catt
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'll be dead honest with you. I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHOOP!!!!!!Excellent please update soon!!!!!!^_^
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great start! Please, update soon!
person MidnightTimberWolf
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the chapter, but the way you stated Kagome giving in when he bit her is the part I did not like. Kagome's temper should have risen instead of crying in pain. But your the author and I did like the chapter so don't get me wrong. Continue....By all means..... Or the tomatoes will fly..... Peace
person Takhisis
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
all I can say is... WOW!

I loved your first chapter, and I hope it will be just that: FIRST of a lot to come! ;)

You could practically cut the sexual tension between them with I knife... oh, how I love sexual tension, perhaps even more than lemons themselves! ^_^

Just one (maybe stupid) question: I keep wondering... why would souta want to heat up their meals, in the morning?? won't they be cold again by the time they get to eat them??? Anyway, just a stupid thought ^_^

Please keep up the good work, and don't keep us waiting too long!!!!!!
person pyrospirit
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey great story so far, i really like inuyasha seduction stories and i can all ready tell this one will be one of my favorites, plz update soon and plz dont start the story and never finish it i really hate when writers do that.

p.s. if u have more stories i would like to read them so if u can, can u e-mail me the titles
THANK YOU!!!!^-^