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for The Seduction Game

by XYZ

person Alpine02
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I ran across this story for the 1st time today and I read the whole thing in like 2 hours.. It is absolutely fantastic.. I loved the whole thing and I really am hoping you will have the chance to update soon. It is now getting really quite exciting and is a great WIP.. Thanks so much for the great read and I can't wait to see what happens next.

P.S. doesn't matter if you write long or short chappy's... Just like updates sooner.

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Alpine
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good and this is my second time reading it and i still love it!
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty good. I'd like to
see where you take it. I like the fact that
you put in real debates and issues. It makes
the story unique. Keep up the good work.
I want to see how Inuyasha and Kagome hook up!
person evasal
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear about your diagnosis, hang in there!

i am in love with this story, and i love seeing inuyasha change! I hope you are able to get well and treated (i don't know much about cataract). So don't force yourself but update soon! I look foward to learning about what you have in store for us readers!

and that mist..... what the hell? @.@ looks like inuyasha and kagome don't have an easy road ahead of them!
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story, be sure to update again soon!
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We in the United States Army and United States Marine Corps are not waging some kind of blind slaughter on the Iraqi populace - we are attempting to stop a religious civil war, eliminate al-Qaeda, and rebuild the country, whatever the reason Congress sent us in in the first place. The only thing CNN or MSNBC report about is "X number of U.S. troops killed by IED" or "Soldiers A and B murder innocent civilians," and they're never around while we're doing good things and always watching when a few idiots fuck up. At the very least, I know that I am not a war criminal or homicidal maniac given a rifle by Uncle Sam. I'll be in Baghdad in two weeks; wish me luck.
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good writing, though. LOL, war
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So are you ever going to finish this story? We've been waiting ever so long. It is a good story but would be better if it was finished.
person rowdygirl
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is great! i've had so much fun reading it. good thing kagome is more forgiving than me, i'm afraid there were moments where i would have made sure his days of fun were over...just because i could and he pissed me off. are you a marketing or business major? i only ask because i will be getting my fine arts degree after i get my degree in ceramic technology. however, you definitely gave me the impression that you've been studying too much! i think you should spend more time writing new chapters and posting them. but that's just me.
person fallenangel7583
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey gurl!!! realized i never reviewed this chappy! but i think i sent you back an email on it. ^__^ anyway, you know your work is always golden!! i miss this story, though!! it's the damn best writing i tihnk i've ever read! (and mind you, i'm an english major). get to it, Lady, and write us some more smut or i'll send the chupacabras after you! >.< miss ya!!!!!! hope all is well in life, and that you're doing good!