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for The Seduction Game

by XYZ

person Kat
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't have an acct but would like updates so here is my E-mail: KatGrrrrl99@aol.com
person Mandy
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*severly overheating* Your writing is wonderful and I love the tension between the two. Although I'd love to read some lemony goodness, I really hope she leaves him doing the begging, stupid jerk! I'd appreciate if you could notify me of updates. My email is AHill12@neo.rr.com. Thanks and it is much appreciated!

Mandy
person sessharu
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ow inuyashas so sexy
please write more
soon please
person kupo
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I normally don't read IY fanfics. But I really like this one. My e-mail address is tristasp@yahoo.com tell me when u update!
person tiffany
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow wat a great story...u are so good..please update soon...
person ivy
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i really love your story please please i wish you had a lemon in this story
and keep up the good job your story is awesome ( can you email me when
you update this story please thanks)
person Touya
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it
Please email me when u review
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dear god, this story is a masterpeice. you have such a great character depiction laid out for each of your people that it's amazing. it makes me sad that you haven't written more on it. let me tell you, someone needs to open the windows cause its getting hot in here! that was great! i love stories with bad boy yash who can get whatever he wants then suddenly is smacked from his pedistal. GREAT story, wondeful character motivations and definitions. i love it. now i really really really hope you plan on writing more, cause if you don't, it would be a shame!
person Aly
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful! it keeps you on your toes the whole entire time,wanting to know what inuyahsa and kagome fighting for control. I have no doubts in the writers talents and I understand she does not own it but sheor he is amazing at writting a finctional story. I bet they do well in english, or did well. It also had some humor in it which did make me luagh out loud. Miroku is just how he is in the show except he's a bit more strong and not as weak as he seems. I don't really care though... he should be like that if inuyasha grabbed him by the neck.anyways..... This fanfictional story is a must read. please as the writer says enjoy in reading this. I wish to tell the writer that I am waitting for the next thing to happen
aly
person Sorena
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. Well-written, long chapters which are very interesting to read. Although I doubt any guy would be quite so so arrogant, you never know :) You're a wonderful author and I hope you continue with this fic soon!