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for The Seduction Game

by XYZ

person sesshouchick
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY IT"S GREAT PLEASE UPDATE SOON and What is the T Family planning for Gome and Yasha?
person Shrew
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a kick ass story dude -- i love it. just enough humor and...um spice...to catch the readers eye. i hope you update soon -- want to know what he gave 'Gome....why do i think it's going to be something dirty? anyway, update soon!!
person Hello? How old are you?
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
College libraries allow access to ANYTHING on the Internet. Why would an adult college student need permission from a professor in order to access online resources? Have you ever been in college? You certainly don't have a realistic view of how colleges operate. Are you still in high school where they use filters? If you are that young, why are you on an adult web site?
person fallenangel7583
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...i was really happy to see that this was updated. i absoulty love this story and am honored and floored that you like my work. but yes, i don't think i can say enough times that this story is amazing. you have successfully managed to nail a perfect InuYasha playboy that absolutly freakin melts my heart. it just aggrivates me that there were never ANY guys like that at ANY of my schools (HS or the three colleges i went to) GRR. your line, Inuyasha's insistent sexual advances was amazing, how can she resist? Good god you have granted that girl some amazing will power.

anyway, enough of the mindless rants of how much i love inu-babe. your characterizations of your key figures is amazing, you haven't wavered from a single one and have hit all the nails on the head exactly. i swear i can completly see InuYasha acting in such according ways as you have thrust him into. it's great. and i absoultly love the fact that you have made BOTH of his parents alive and well. i'm just shocked that his fahter allows him to carry out such scandelous behavior with women...then again, i guess he is of proper age to do as he pleases.

but yes, your plot is divine and your characters are to die for. i can't wait to read more! absolutly amazing!!!
person Ashes
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so i just finished the first chapter and wow, you've amazed me. i'm really excited to read the next two, but unfortuinatly i have errands to run. **sigh** oh well. gues i'll have to wait until i get home. but wow, you've really got me hooked! Lots of love!
Ashes
person sublimetrickster
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well what do you know, here you ask me to read yours and I find I already have been reading it. I really do like this story, I think it's very well written and you should keep going with it. Things moved a bit fast in the beginning, but that's hot so go with it. You are a very good writer, very good at lemon and lime in my opinion. Keep up the hard work! I look forward to reading more!
person Ashes`
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T STAND THE SUSPENSE!!!
person Ashes
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love this story!!! Please, please, PLEASE update soon!!!! I love the plot so far and the characters are just wonderful!!! OOh, what do they have up their collective sleeves...?
person Apathy5
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good and I'm enjoying it alot. One question, you said you would explain about Inu biting Kagome. She didn't seem too concerned about the bite and he didn't explain what it meant. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Please update as soon as you can. I see you have school to deal with and that is important. (I'm just acting nice, what I'm really saying is UPDATE SOON!!!) hehehe
person Alexial_798
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! OMG!!! That was SOOO GOOD! You like HAVE to update....SOON!!! Please? I jsut have to find out what happens next!!! Thanks.