rate_review Reviews

Hi. I'm joined this site just so I could send you a review!! I LOVE this fic so much it inspired me to write my first ever Inu/Kag story!! I'm an avid/rabid Sess/Kag fan so it's not my first fic but this will be my first in this genre though. You inspired me through your betrayal of Inuyasha. I don't usually read or go near Inu/kag, but your story caught me interest and once I started reading, I was hooked. Inuyasha is so fierce and so much more in touch with his inu nature than in most fics.I have tried to read one-shot Inu/kag, but they all seem to be so fluffy and sweet and that just not how I pictured Inuyasha behaving at all no matter how much he's in love with Kagome. I like your betrayal because he is still true to his nature but he still shows that softer side we've come to love about the roughish hanyou. But back to the story itself, I love the plot and your narrative style but you do have an bit of an issue with Kagome's eye color. I know it bluish-gray but sometimes you say it's brown that can get really confusing since Kagome is cast with both colors due to some confusion with anime and manga. Her eyes are blue in the manga but brown in the anime. Anyway, make sure to watch out for that. And if you still need a beta, I'm willing. I'm a beta as well as a part time writer. I have some chapter stuff I'm working on, but lately due to writer's block, I've been sticking to one-shots and I don't want to get out of touch with fanfic world so I started beta-ing and I find it very relaxing. So if you haven't found a beta, please contact me at my email address and we can work something out. Until your next chapter!!

Aw, nutbunnies! I was hoping to find yet another chapter. Keep it up. :)

Thank you so much for updating! I was constantly checking back it hopes to see when the next chapter would be up. Anyway, another amazing chapter! I really can not wait for you to update again. As for your question, I would say longer chapters even though it means longer time in between each update. I haven't read a chapter I haven't loved so far, so it is worth a little wait =)!

Oh my dear god, I found your story just leafing through looking for something quick and cheeky to read, and I got more than I bargained for, but at such an a appreciation! I couldn't leave the computer until I had gone through all 10 chapters. This is one of the best AU fan-fics I have read pertaining to Inuyasha and Kagome. I love how you kept their hot tempers and attraction for one another, while adding a little spice of your own! I don't believe you have anything to fear when it comes to writing a lemon, the build ups you create are tantalizing and may I even be so bold (and I hope I am not offending anyone) as to say that they even get me a little hot anticipating the next actions between the two. A very enjoyable tease each time... I hope that you will find the courage you need to right an amazing lemon,(I have every belief it will be) and cannot wait until your next installment!! ::adds to favorites:: Please keep up the great work :)

So far, I am enjoying your plot and premise and the questions that come along with them. However, while I appreciate the fact that you have clearly done your research (might I venture a guess that you took lots of Economics?) I feel that the long breaks of information on their class information takes away from your story's flow. A few sentences would suffice without full paragraphs. I honestly skimmed over it the first time and skipped it every time after. That also goes for the huge description of Inuyasha's room. While you may have the whole of it mapped out in your mind, unless Kagome or Inuyasha are specifically paying attention to something in the room, you don't need to go into so much detail because it quickly takes the reader out of the action and drags on. I don't mean offense because I'm enjoying your story I just wanted to give you some tips (I work as an editor and majored in Professional Writing). I really like your characterization of Kagura and Izayoi.
Oh, one other thing -- I like that you respond to your readers, but you might want to put the responses at the bottom, especially if you are going to respond to MM, AFF, and FF on every site. It pushes your story way down on the page and distracts from your actual work. Just my opinion on that one -- the other tip is backed by experience and lots of books.
Thanks for the recommendation of "Scented Candles." I'm already a HUGE fan of Wendy's (LOVE LOVE Shades of Gray).

Okay, I reviewed on fanfiction, therefore my job is done but...

Great fic!!!!!
Okay, on my preferences, I prefer more frequet updates even if they are shorter.

So glad to read your story again !!! Sometimes, there is a pretty story (such yours), deep, rich, so good and ... nothing more, one month, one year, bouououououhhhhh ! And when, as by miracle, it appears again, that's all delight and joyce in my heart ! Thank you ! Long chapter or not, I'm unable to do a choice : you write it as you feel, don't you ? I prefer the quality when the chapter comes on my screen...

A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

i really love this story i just wish it would move a little faster

Great bleeding story... got wind of it because of my dear friend TiffanyM who it seems has been reading it on some site called cadkitten. Well any-who I decided to poke my nose around to find it on a site I had an account on, hope you update soon

All I am going to say on the matter is: you have the right of free speech, you have the right to voice your opinion on any subject which engages your intellect. However, others also have this same right and if you choose to voice your opinion in a public forum, which this is, then you must be prepared for others to do the same, and voice divergent opinions. That being said, while I respect that you chose your story as your forum, it did detract from the storyline. It is a good story with engaging characters, I am certain that it will withstand the inclusion of your essay. As for those who are mortally offended by it, they can read some other story - there is NEVER a reason for nastiness or cruelty, as the saying goes, mean people suck.