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for The Seduction Game

by XYZ

person rekkashinen
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!It's so hot!please don't give it up it would be a shame!so I'm looking for your next update!hope it come soon!^_^
person TricksterGoddess
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are so mean!!! What's the present, come on!!! I lurf this story and understand how time consuming college can be... but could you please update, lemon or not. The more you wait for the lemon, the better the story usually is. So I'm in no hurry to beg for one at the moment. I love the long chapters. Your detail is wonderful and just the story line is very creative and enjoyable to read. Please update soon, I am obviously awaiting for the next chapter and keep up the good work as well, at school and with this story^__^!!!
person Just A Fan
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a note to Hello? How old are you?

First of all it's really none of your business how old Shizuka Kaze is. Second of all, what right do you have in saying that she shouldn't be on this website. It's really, really none of your business and she is an AMAZING AUTHOR.

When I read some of the reviews, I found yours and I found it very offensive. Third of all, this is a GREAt story why does that one little fact bother you, besides this is the author's story. GRRRRR... I'm not even the author and I felt very, very offended. MIND YOUR BUSINESS...

PHEW... I'm sorry if this is just wasting space Shizuka, bit I'm not even the author and I felt very, very offended. Please, please, please update soon. I honestly love this story. It's my absolute favorite
person Church
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE YOU DONT KNOW HOW HAPPY THIS MAKES ME FEEL WOOHOO Here are some revies from my hippy side and commi side (communist) Oh dude i thnk i am lik high right now becuz of ur story an not my weed an i thnk i found another source of good weed *keeps reading* i thnk i am rlly high now. GOODJOB U BLOKE NICE WAY TO SPICE THNGS UP GOODWORK
person Apathy5
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good. Please update soon. btw, I don't know how to get an automatic update from AFF. Could you send me a note when you update? Are you doing that?
person vanessa
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story

very detailed

chow
person inu\'s bitch
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it keep going keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person lost child
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter, I must read more
person lost child
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is funny. ur a very good writer. On to the next chapter
person lost child
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say it again. wonderful chapter. I have written a review for the chapters I have read. Normally I don't do that, but I wanted you to know that I really like ur story and hope u update soon