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for The Seduction Game

by XYZ

person Zelix (not signed in)
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, updated at last! This chapter was superb.... i loved it, i truly loved it! The relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome is simply perfect, so funny and intense at the same time, i just simpyl adore it!

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person yasmin
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Niiiiiiiice.....i like the fic , i have been following it whenever i remember lol but uhm......inuyasha is gonna falll hard for kagome ....is evident lol anyway z i love the work .....keep it up , and cant wait till the next chappy !! TTFN!!!!
person TricksterGoddess
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! You updated!!! That was an awesome comeback for whomever that person was! *Bows down to expert ability to tell someone off* Anyways, since it’s been awhile for you to update, which I have absolutely no problem with, for it just gives me an excuse to re-read your wonderful fic^^ which I am happy that I have because I now understand it much better for it turns out that I had overlooked some of the minor details that made the story somewhat confusing at parts, but still awesome. The newest chapter was great with Inu Yasha and Kagome torturing each other and unknowingly falling for each other, so schweet! Please don’t take so long to update, it nearly killed me to wait for so long. Keep up the good work^__^!!!
person Ceaseless Cloudy Days
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, crap, Kikyou's gonna be a conflict now? Well, it's not as if I hate her or anything, it's just that it interrupts the Inuyasha/Kagome flow...but I guess there has to be conflicts in romantic Inuyasha fanfics, right? And in fact, Kikyo's one of my favorite characters in the show, but her airy personality doesn't make her fit for romance at all.

And yay, you finally updated! I almost forgot about this story entirely, but I'm glad I didn't because it's one of the only fanfics here that I actually like and review without feeling as if it's so much of a hassle. ^_^;; Your writing style is great, and the err...almost sex scenes are kinda funny by this point. They get sort of redundant after a while--Inuyasha throws himself on Kagome, Kagome gets turned on, then snaps out of it, and blows him off. Err--blowing off in a way that she's turning him down, lol...not the other meaning...XD
person Anon
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when is the new chapter coming
person Anon
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay so my first review was rather... hmmm how to put this, rude I guess. Nono, it was definitely rude. Argggg well anyway i was having a bad day and you just sort of got on my nerves with the whole pushing your fic to the front and all. It just screams desperate, I eamn it kind of makes you seem like a whore begging for reviews, I mean come on, just update the fucking fic already and stop hesitating and throwing your fic out there, God!!!! Sorry, I don't mean to be mean, it's just annoying
person Galadrihm_Star
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha such an asshole!!!! I love it!!!!!! Please update soon!!
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOD!!!! All you do is fucking beg for reviews, you disgust me!!!!!! SWINE!!!!!!
person TwEeK
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh...you must so busy to keep such eager readers waiting! Keep up the beautiful work! Can't wait till the update!
person Daniela
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG !!!!!!!! HOW COULD U JUST END IT LIKE THAT!!!!!!! *faints* u have 2 finish PLEASEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! email me n tell me if u finished it pleaseee i gota c wat happens!!! *faints again*