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i really love this story i like everything about plus the chapters are extra long and i like that. anyway please update soon i really want to see how this plays out.

great!!! another good chapter! your very talented. please keep up the good work and update soon i've been waiting forever for your next chapter.

I love this story I mean Kagome matching wits with Inuyasha it's wonderful to see ^^

LOVED IT, TOTALY LOVED IT. HOPE TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS FIC TOO....OHH BY THE WAY LOVE YOUR WRITING STYL TOO....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

this is a great start to a story i cant waite to see what Inuyasha does next to the poor Innocent Kagome UPDATE SOON!!

You know I like this story but you have me confused. First Sesshoumaru says Kagome's room is on the second floor but Inuyasha takes her to the third floor. Then you wrote that her eyes were blue in the sunset but then a few paragraphs later, you said her eyes were chocolate. It is very confusing when you switch facts around. Please fix it. Thank you.

The fan that was interwoven with what?! Argh! Not to mention you leave us with an entrance by Kikyo. *sigh* I guess I will have to wait for your next update...but not patiently!

Great story, by the way ^_~ The exchanges between Inuyasha and Kagome make me laugh and cause me to be breathless at the same time. This is really well written and flows smoothly. I must say that it has become one of my favorite stories here. No complaints! Keep doing what you're doing! (and for the love of god make it soon! ^_^)

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY.
I'M LOSING MY MIND!!!!!!I LOVE THIS STORY

I have to ask if you get the ideas from your dreams....is that day dreaming or sleeping dreaming. Once again you suprised me. I used to rarely come on the net but since I read your story, I check every month, at least 5 times. I would like to compliment you on your writting skills, you are damn better then some of the other stories. most of them are extrodinary though. just those little ones that make no sense. what an I rambl,ing on about?! Never mind;great chapter keep going, if you stop i think i am going to go crazy for a few months wondering what happens. love you work.
AAR

i love this! ^_^ i love it so much, im going to stay here and wait until you finish another chapter *takes out tent and marshmellows* UPDATE!!!