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for The Seduction Game

by XYZ

person Zelix
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bit more serious chapter this time eh? But the humour parts were still good though, i liked this chapter and how it went... i just love how Inuyasha's Youkai side and human side seem to keep butting heads all the time lke that... hehehe, anyway, hope you get the next chapter out soon, though seeing as how the quality of this fic is so high, i doubt it will be anytime soon, since i know how hard it is to write quality fiction.

Also, thank you for the review on "Loneliness of the Free Wind", i'm so glad you enjoyed the story and i hope that if you someday read the sequel, "Time Soul Exodus", you'll enjoy that as well... it's even been nominated into the IY fanguild into the "best original character" and "best serial fic" categories, so i am pretty sure it's safe to say it is good, i think so at least.

Anyway, hope to hear from you someday again, until then, see ya!
person orbed_maiden
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! i'm so curious!!! and aff is just teasing me by putting it on the first page!! please update soon!!
person mindy
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i gotta hand it to you, holy shit 8500 words u should get an emmy! what was that like 30 pages?
person mia
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update *sob* *sob*
person Zipper Tantrum [[offline]]
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Wonderful. Hot. Loved it. Short sentences meant to get my thoughts out. I love how you portray Inu Yasha, and the school system you describe is wonderful, as is your sense of time/space. Most people do one-day-per-chapter, and I like how you've stretched it to four. As I stated, your style is wonderful, your ideas are beautiful, and the sexual tension is hot. This is a must-read, and I look forward to an update!
person Velika
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you should really update..... this story is great =)
person ~*T*~
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting SOOOO LONG!!! for u
to update this story. I'm still standing by it
because this is the BEST story i have ever read.
PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE.
i can't keep waiting in anticipation .please finish soon!
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i feel like i've been waiting for 10 years for you to update! don't tell me you abandoned this story!! it's the best story and you have a lot of talent !!! please update and no i'm not lying when i say you are born to write this!!! ^_^ D.I.
person Puppet
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Tis soooo funny! And I love the pairing; I too can't see Sesshy boy going and doing stuff with Rinny poo.....That seems too weird.
Keep up the good work! Hope to see more in the future!
Later love~
person Vania
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No offenese, but although I think this story is quite good so far, it really needs updating! .....What's taking so long?