rate_review Reviews

First of all the fic is awesome. I wil give you a pat on the back for the nice work. But I will have to agree with the other anon reviewer. I also write and I keep seeing your story being pushed. Understandable if you update everyday. But you have only five chapters. I've seen another author do it. Let me say it can be annoying. I think you have great writing talent don't get me wrong, you're awesome. But I could see where the other review was coming from though the cursing wasn't necessary. Editing is fine but doesn't explain a story being pushed up all the time. I've read you're story I didn't see many mistakes so editing should only take a little bit. This is not a flame

wow!!! awsome chapter!!!! awsome!!! u left me hanging in the ending... u have to update as soon as possible!!!! i wanna kno wat happens!!! lol. please continue!!!!

-danni-

omg, this is great! keep on writing!

Is Inuyasha going to go after kanna, or is he going to refuse to let Kagome leave his sight, for fear that something will happen to her? I really love your story i hope you wright more.

YAY! finally u updated@!!!!! im so happy and im VERY vure all the other readers are too! i've been waiting FoReVeR!!! and i eman it! plz update sooner than last time! i don't want to wait that long again T-T i'll be reviewing for every chapter! oh and im anon if u don't know ^_^

So I guess Scented's your teacher huh? Well I though the chapter was oretty damn good, but I still see parts where some of your writing is almost totally the same as Scented's. Odd... but I liked this chapter, hope you update soon.

Well its not really your fault for me being confused.. I just read things very fast.. it sometimes takes me one or more times to read a book or anything to actually take in all the information... for example, well not really, I've read the Third Harry Potter book 21 times.. but then again.. I'm insane like that.. so yea. Hmm, Kikyo and Kanna.. one trying to stop Inu Yasha the other Kagome.. and yet the circumstances for each is oddly enough pain. Very interesting..^^' I can understand why Kikyo is so uptight, but i think Kanna needs to go to an insane asylum or something.. because thats just crazy hurting someone because of a fantasy! So.. will Inu Yasha's blood have any other effect on Kagome other than healing her? Will it make her want him even more against her will? Things could get even more interesting.. Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!

aWW how sweet, so Inuyasha is going to tutor her *grins*...

And ya know what? the oddest image just popped up into my oh so vivid imagination of Kagome eating dinner with Inuyasha and the rest of his family and they got into a fight and it ended up with Inuyasha backing Kagome up into a wall until she turned the tables by being provocative and kicked him in the balls leaving him on the floor after a yelp of pain while she growled and turned to the rest of his family and asked if she could be excused from the table innocently and then went to her room! It was actually quiet comical! Just to imagine the faces on the two other males in the room… as well as the barely concealed laugher of his mother and sister-in-law and innocent confusion of Rin!

Oh well i hope you update soon though this chapter took too long to come out for my tasts since I've been going out of my mind for something good to read! And this story isn't only good its grrrrrreat!

Aww, I liked Kanna! Up until the point were you turned her into a jealous, InuYasha-obsessed bitch that is... Anyway, great job on completing another awesome chapter! *claps hands enthusiastically* To be able to write like you do, you must have a really good edumecation (^^)! I hope you update soon, but until then, I'll be waiting.

P.S.- Congratumelations and edumecation are all I have, so please don't think I'm slathering it on. (But I'm glad that congrats made your day!) K, I'm done now. Buh-bye.

This just keeps getting better and better. First, you did the impossible and changed my opinion of Kikyo. Then between the comedy and drama you fit in a cute little romantic scene. But if Kagome and Kikyo are related, then why didn't Kogome use her sacred powers like Kikyo did? And then there's the big question: When are you going to update again?