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I like this story but where is the rest of it?  Are you ever going to finish it or update it?

I know you haven't update this story in a long time, but it's such a shame to leave such a fantastical read unfinished. I would truly love it if you might one day consider updating it with a new chapter. Pretty, pretty, pretty please? :D

Hello,

I am very interested in your fan fiction and would like to continue to read any future updates. I do however, would like point out many parts of your story seem to be "proving your intelligence". I hope this does not seem to blunt to brusque, but the full debates, paragraphs of full equations are most certainly useful in establishing character building. Sometimes though they will alienate readers. I do have to say though I do enjoy the Easter eggs once in a while. In the case of a few chapters, I ended up scrolling through whole paragraphs, to reach the story line again. In all though I do appreciate all the work placed in to this work and eagerly wait for future updates

Thank you,
Sunday

Pleeeease write more!!!!!

I've not enjoyed a good fanfic in a LONG time!!!

Please email me when you update!!! xx

Ah! This is quite a lovely story! I am excited to see where you are going with this :) til next time!

I absolutely love this! I just found it and I'm sad to see it hasn't been updated in almost 2 years. I just wanted to pipe up and say you've got a great story going here, and you're still gaining new readers if you decide to pick it up again! :)

Hello, me again.
I was bored and decided to read your reviews, seeing as you mention them at the beginning of each new chapter, it piqued my interest; however your last one kinda ticked me off.
@CherryFlavored : you my dear, are sorely mistaken when you said that this story repeats itself over again in each chapter.
Each chapter adds something new, something exciting that builds up the anticipation of the reader. The content is similar, yes; but not without purpose.
Shizuka Kaze puts a lot of effort into their writing and has a wonderfully detailed plot. The fact that you can't see past the words, into the hidden story beneath is your problem, for you won't be able to appreciate how truly wonderful and entertaining this story has been.

Shizuka Kaze, darling. keep up the wonderful work, I love this story and am very patiently waiting for an update whenever you can get around to it.
*huggles* loves it!!!

Sagura-hime

All I can say is that this story is pretty much nothing. Same scenario in every chapter. Inuyasha hits on Kagome, Kagome denies him, he keeps trying. It would be different if he had new tactics but it's all the same: he kisses her brutally, she pushes him away, they get nowhere. Adding in some sappy story in the background of it all does nothing except cause a distraction until you make up some new scene where they can replay the same thing that was in the previous chapters.

After about chapter 3 I just started skimming because it was so boring. I am curious, as a write myself, as to how you are going to make Kagome give in to Inuyasha's playboy-ness after 10 chapters-worth of her resisting everything he's already done. I was expecting something to eventually happen near Ch. 10 but, again, you have Inuyasha and Kagome playing this hard-to-get game.

It is one thing to leave a reader with a cliffhanger, or the eagerness of wanting to know what will happen next with the couple. And the overall interest to find out when they will end up having sex. But you have done none of these. Your story lacks realism in the aspect of how college works, your characters also lack any personality besides that of anger and lust, and the plot you have behind this sex-game thing is so incredibly unneeded and boring that it actually caused me to write this review.

Write up a real plot that serves some purpose and wasn't just thrown in to create more to an already boring story, and then create life within your characters that aren't driven by hatred, anger, and their "arousal" for whoever.

This story is going nowhere. Good luck on your future projects. Hopefully it doesn't turn out like this one.

BTW I read some of your reviews and responses. You were saying someone who flamed your story was being arrogant or whatever by asking if you had any real knowledge of college life. You told them to act differently next time, I believe. You should really learn to not be so hypocritical. And honestly, learn more about college life before preaching about "realism" in your story, especially after flaming your flamer with saying "this is a fanfiction".

love Love LOVE!! this story! can't wait for the next chapter SQUEE!! Please update soon ^-^

I love this story, you're an terrific author. Can't wait for the next chapter ^-^