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You know you should make a second chapter where InuYasha gets his Christmas Wish.

That was really dirty, though I was kind of confused about the whole wood thing and couldnt figure out whether or not they were having sex or putting in the tree. Very well written^^

OMG...I love how you made it seem sooooo very sexual when it was get simply trying to get the tree into the tree stand!

The whole time I was trying to figure out what they were really doing but man I couldn't think of it! Awesome and hilarious! I wanted to make this really long but I'm sleepy yet hyped on sugar which makes a bad combination. It usually results in me being extremly professional and/or saying things that make no sense. Great story though! Wait a minute did I already review this?... I can't remember for the life of me... *falls asleep*

Tee hee hee

Heehee. That was dandy. *claps*

lmfao the intire time I was reading I was thinking 'Does this peson.. really think it is that hard to put a dick in a twat?'
I started cracking up laughing when I found out XD

Ah! real Cute, Cutie Pie! Very nice!

OMG! This was just...lol...and AWWW Cute! In a strange hentai sort of way lol :) You evil girl you...I'm still laughing my ass off and knowing my laughing fits I will probably giggle all the way to work...lol...great job! I'm so adding this to my rec readings too (did you see? SS is there! I figured out italics thanks to you and now I figured out the list! Me so proud of myself! Um...that was sad wasn't it?) If you plan on writing a sequel to this, let me know please! This was just the coolest Christmas fic! And they do deserve a...ahem...Christmas wish ::wink wink:: I know SS comes first and I would cry if you didn't update THAT one :) But if you ever get stuck I would be honored to (try) and help...as for one-shots...I for one can't seem to manage them...I tried, because they keep asking me for the lemons, that I've already written (unlike the rest of my story...::sigh::) but every time I try to turn one of them into a one-shots it ends up...having chapters lol...and then I know I'd be stuck with long and unfinished stories...so I won't do one-shot lemons until I finish my fic, I promised Scherezade I'd save one of my lemon scenes for a one-shot though :) You're right, it'll probably be good to write a one-shot to get over my writer's block...but I just don't seem to be able to get it right...ah, I'm babbling...this is supposed to be a review for your fic!
What comes to mind is lol and aww and wow...not very articulate now am I? lol...I'm sorry, still laughing...You ROCK! Want more! SO many Christmas wishes come to my hentai mind...and I had to wonder, if Miroku had had the chance to *hear* this conversation without seeing anything...pretty much like we did until it was finished :) Lol...poor Inu would never hear the end of it! Actually, I think the monk would have died laughing before Inu could beat him up to death...lol...this was so cool! ::jumps up and down:: Still laughing...need to settle down lol...you go girl!

OMG! That was SO good! I wasn't thinking at all hentai-ish... i thought maybe they were playing Jenga or something... because of the wood... and ummm... yeah. Great shot.
btw, can't wait to read more of Sloppy Seconds!