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by syntaxerror

schedule July 12, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I really like it so far!! PLEEEEEEEASE continue updating it & finish it soon!!

person orvida
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that you are going to continue this story i'm not to fond of cliff hangers but as long as you updateas often as possible i'll be most content to wait for you to post it.
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plze update plze
person Mmoirai
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am interested in seeing this story continued. Poor Rin!
person ionizesatomizes
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome, but oohh please update, i want to know what happens so badly.
person mushi
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Am looking forward to more!
person aku_neko
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehe

i'm a major sucker of Rin/sess stories. To be honest, i was wary of it at first. I'd encountered several horribly written ones today. I'm very much impressed by the drama and action that you've set up. Rin's dilemma and her need to leave those she knows behind her is very believable. The words flow naturally and are very much SAT level. The fact that the words aren't forced deserves praise.

i'm very much intrigued as to what will occur next. I'll be looking for and update, k?

kudos!!

=^o^=
person T
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Rin/Sess pairings are the best.
person Tejas
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
like your story alot ,grabs you from the first.
person turtlerad17
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
looks good, very good......*drool Sesshomamru*.........