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by Atropa

person Gabby
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woowee! Great so fare! But what does that matter? all of your stories are great!
person little_flower
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hum............ not bad and i can t wait to see more action between all the people, what are going to happing next
that my question.........
keep going
person Dark Topaz
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good very good give us more
person cindy
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice story, hope you update soon! ^.^ so who are you going to pair sango with?
person Tom
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well you are suiting things to your liking although that is making the battle redicoulous. Something like this only truly works when you have a Piont of divergence where everything up to when you change events happens. A little retooling and you'll make this more plausible, otherwise this is basicaly plotless.
person Pyro
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is a briliant Idea!! keep up the great work..omg im def. hooked to this story ^_^