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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Last chapter was powerful... dunno if you're a Buffy the Vampire Slayer fan, but that whole chapter reminded me of the episide 'The Body', where Buffy finds her mother dead from an aneurism. The episode shifts from happy christmas scenes to horrifying present reality so fast it makes your head spin. Excellent visuals.
--julie
--julie
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter. Great chapter. Want more chapters! Please update soon. and now for me to get back to school before I'm late! Keep up the good work!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was so happy to see that u update, awwww i can picture kouga as a little pup so cute hehe. i can't wait till u update again so excite to see what developes w/ kouga and kagome!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Love the insight in to Kouga's
childhood - and the insight on his parents.
Awesome.
childhood - and the insight on his parents.
Awesome.
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you back, and thank you, I really enjoyed this chapter! It's nice when writers give the characters believable personalities, in that they have reasons why they do the things they do. And don't worry a won't say a word. (grins) Keep up the great work.
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.....*takes a deep breath and wipes a tear away* whew....that was a good one. Great chapter, Kouga got his well deserved attention, poor guy. For all his hard ship and un dying love, he deserves to win over Kagome. *wink wink* haha A+++ as always.
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i came across this story, i love Kouga/Kagome stories and it's very hard to find really good ones. i think this is an awesome story so far. i love Inu/Kag but i also very much love Kouga/Kag ones aswell, i'm so happy i've found one ^_^. since reading it i've cried *like a baby*, laughed and felt all the goodness aswell. i'm really looking forward to reading more of this wonderful story. i think u are an awesome writer very good job, i hope u update again soon!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t! Excellent chapter E! I'm sorry I didn't get to send that chapter back to you - it was a bad weekend. Like, it started off bad then just went down hill from there. But this was an excellent chapter and I love the way you have Kagome doing some much-needed introspection. I can't wait to see what's up with Kikyou!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey glad to see this updated, I've had intended on reading it but got sidetracked. I like the depth you are starting to give to Kouga' s character. Also that you are making Kagome take care of herself a little more. She has always been brave when needed, but never took charge and did things on her own. Um the idea crossed my mind that the two of them are Inside the spider, (yuck). If so, interesting. Hope to see more soon.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you amaze me with another great chapter. You had me in awe when Kagome was trying to kiss the sleepy Kouga, and it was even better when she was seemingly caught. Oh and the "fish for your thoughts" was a nice touch of a new phrase with a unique twist. Makes me wonder were it may have originally came from. ; ) Keep up the good work. I look forward to more. Oh by the way I loved your end author's note. As we give reviews we are also glad that you recognize us as well. ~Niko