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I can't for the life of me predict what's going to happen next (I haven't read Grimm's fairytales since I was a child so I don't remember what happens either) and that is good. I like it when I read a story that I don't figure out the plot for the rest of the fic within the first three chapters. This time I'm going to expect the unexpected :)
Seems Kagome is slipping into depression. It's good that she gets a bit of privacy even if her room isn't that nice so she can process everything that's happened to her. It's a radically different environment for her and it will probably take some time to adjust. I'm sorry to hear that she doesn't have any friends to help her adjust more easily.
Kagura showing up will probably be a very interesting event to say the least. She is loyal to the princess and forced to work for Naraku. Very unpredictable character.
It's going to be fun to learn more about this meeting that is supposed to take place at Sesshomaru's castle. Who is participating and what exactly are they discussing?
What about Naraku? Doesn't people in the kingdom know that he is taken over by a youkai or do they simply not have the means to put their foot down and rebell? What does the other lords and ladies think of all that has transpired? Is it known that princess Kagome escaped from his lands? So many questions :) Hopefully they will be answered as the story unfolds.

Keep up the good work!

/Zmyrra

Hmmm I like subtle hints so I decided I better review I like what I am reading and a fine fleshing out of the fable I might add looking forward to reading more chapter now leaves a subtle hint of his own" more chapters faster writeing *LOL*

Okay, update soon... i hope nothing too drastic happens... though your summary mentioning both incest and N/C does make me rather nervous... update soon, that's all i can say.

Hurry! Write more, I beg of you! I can not take the suspense! Waiting for the moment when her beauty is revealed is killing me! KILLING MEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! I must know what happens, and soon!!!!! Pleeeeeeaaaase!
~Valkyrie
PS. Love your story, babe. Your writing is excellent.

Just found your story. I remember reading this as a kid. Princess Furball I believe it's called. Great story. I can't wait to read more please hurry with the next chapter!! :)

Excellent! A lovely story base on one of my favorite tales. What more could one ask for? Quick updates of course! Lol. Seriously, good story. It's always nice to see someone trying out new angles.

Wow, another awwesome chapter and I so relieved that Kagome got away. I was scared for her. I hope that Kagura is going to be okay too. Maybe she'll make an appearance in the Western lands also since you've made mention several times of the fact that she's been strangely attracted to the place eventhough she's never been there.

:D Poor Miroku, though, he really has no idea what he's done....

Love the new chapter! I'm glad Kagome finally got away from Naraku. Once Inuyasha returns to his brother's castle, will Sesshoumaru figure out who Kagome is? Or does Kagome figure it's better to dtay in hiding? Anywho...can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

~Britt

Nicely done, I'm looking forward to more.