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Great story! u know, i luv Naraku/Kagome together. but they're father and daughter in this fic? kinda twisted...and yet...*rubs back of head sheepishly* i still think it's cool. ^_^; ahem... um if Naraku could just get that evilness out of his system then it wouldn't be so hard for Kagome. but now she's been rescued by Inu, seems like they mite get closer and even wind up together. *pouts slightly* i still want Kag and Naraku to end up together, as long as he changes his ways somehow. but, hey maybe that's a lost cost. it's your story ne wayz. Keep up the good work and feel free to email me when ya update!

loved it! I wanna see everybody see Kagome all washed and dressed up pretty! Will Sesshomaru like her too? Update soon!

Sorry I haven't reviewed lately...my internet was down for a while...loved these last two chapters, though I definitely worry about what Kouga will try next...

Hi. I really really like a story. So you should feel grateful that I'm writing a review 'cause I rarely do. I have no criticism whatsoever to make right now. So... please continue writing.

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Hope_Poe26

happy fun time fanfic review: i really like this so far. you have strong writing skills and a good sense of character, even for situations far removed from the canon. keep it up.
cheers.

You silly, silly girl.
Wonderful job! I'm glad you posted...Inu is caught in a web that has Kagome at the center. Now we just need to have Kagome have one of those "I need Inuyasha" moments to make the delayed gratification easier to bare :)
I hope Sesshie denies Naraku permission to search his lands. Grumble...grumble...fathers with incest on their mind should *not* have it easy!
But it would be nice if Inu can put everything together...Naraku's daughter has gone missing...Naraku wants to search the Western lands...a fur clad maiden was found in the forest....
Wheels start turning...

You want reviews huh? Haha, don't we all! In all seriousness, I like your story. It has me on the edge of my seat. I like how you've incorporated the characters in. I looke forward to more chapters!

OMG!!! i luv this story sooooo much! ur such a great writer!! keep up the good work and update soon!

Great chapter! I can't wait to read more!! Please huury with the next chapter!! :)

Awesome! You've got me wondering what Sesshomaru smelt on Kagome! Will Kagome make an appearance as the Princess she is because I thought she was going to ask Sessho for his protection or is she content now with just being a servant? I was just a tiny bit confused, thats all. I love it so far and adore how you introduced Kouga into it all. Update soon!

-Fala