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this is a great chapter! I can't wait to read more!! That poor servent girl. Anyway this was a great chapter!! :)

Hey! I think I might have reviewed before, but I felt that this deserved another one, at least. I have to say, I loved Red Riding Haori, but this is even better! You're one of my favorite authors. ( I just wish you updated more often!) One note: you mention Kagome's eyes dilating a few times in chapter 10. Dilating means that her pupils are getting bigger, which usually happens when a person is either in low light, aroused, or looking at something attractive. Given the situation she's in when you say her eyes are dilating, I think you actually mean to say that they're contracting, which happens in bright light, times of extreme stress, or when looking at something unnattractive. If you really did mean dilated, then you mean dilated. But I just wanted to make sure you knew.
Keep up the good work!

luv it! LUVIN the Kouga action!

I love it! I love it! I love it!

I have to admit that my jaw dropped, quite literally, several times during the reading of this exceptional fic. Its been a VERY long while since I came across anything so well-written, so meticulous and beautiful and well-balanced. You have an absolute gift and I can only say that I am looking forward to the next chapter with a good deal of anticipation. You've succeeding in hooking me, my dear!

I have read this story before but I didn't have an account then. After finishing off the last chapter, I found myself absolutely adoring this fiction. I am so anxious of what will happen next in this brilliant fiction. At this point, I really despised Naruku. You should kill him off, just a suggestion, but I'm thinking that you already decided on what to do with that incestuous freak. Maybe make him die a brutal death? Can't wait to read your next update and good work!

OMG OMG OMG!!! This story is SOOOOOO cool, please update soon I'm DYING to know what happens next!!!

This fanfiction is so good. I read it about a month ago and forgot the title so I couldn't find out if it was updated. But imagine my surprise when I was scanning through the fanfic list and found it. I was so happy. I absolutely love it.

Nicely done, as usual.

Please update as soon as possible o great writter