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for Excruciating Torment

by AryQueen

person Anoxiaperson
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good use of words. Im jealous of your writing skills. : D

I'd ask you to continue, but you cant, it was totally meant to be a one-shot.

WONDERFUL : D
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Rose
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story but I could swear I read it somewhere else... Oh that’s right I did it was in the Sesshomaru/Kagome section. Same name, same exact story word for word the only difference was the date published and name of writer.
person kinky lurker
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay.. so that was gorgeous and hot and wonderful and seductive and i want to read more

that was a great take on the story... but now i want to know what's up, why did kagome go to naraku and how on earth did he get her to lay with him... see, now i need more. the story was very poetic. more!

ja!
~hanyou-elf
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! This story is so well written. Not to mention its hot as hell!
Definitely going on my recommended reading!