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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Take your time. The story is just getting very good.
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story so far but I have to say,Sesshomaru seems a little out of charecter.But over all,it's a good story.keep workin' on it!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good fic. I have few questions, though.
1. Litara's motive. She's full demon, so why is she so intrested of Inuyasha? I hope this will be explained
at some point.
2. Inuyasha's reaction to Litara's speech about soul-mates was wierd. I was expecting comment like:
"Hanyous don't have mates because we are feared by humans and hated by demons." from him.
Well. That's all. Oh yeah, my mail is data_drain@hotmail.com
1. Litara's motive. She's full demon, so why is she so intrested of Inuyasha? I hope this will be explained
at some point.
2. Inuyasha's reaction to Litara's speech about soul-mates was wierd. I was expecting comment like:
"Hanyous don't have mates because we are feared by humans and hated by demons." from him.
Well. That's all. Oh yeah, my mail is data_drain@hotmail.com
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay Holy crap, I just read your entire story for the past 3 hours straight I just couldn't get enough of it!!!! Its great, and the characters aren't that much out of character, and I like where it is going, I can't wait till you update it!!!! THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!! Keep it up!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this and I am in love with it! I cannot wait to see more! ;D
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that you should have some focus on past incidents in regards to Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru before Inuyasha met Kikyo. Inuyasha seems almost too forgiving of all that Sesshoumaru has done. One example is Litara's comment about Inuyasha's eating habits, well who was the reason for him being alone after his mother's death?
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS GREAT. I HOPE THAT YOU CAN CONTINUE WHEN YOU GET THE TIME.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a good story, you have a good story line going here. if you keep it up and maybe bring in a pregnancy or two that will make the males more protective of their mates it may bring something else into it. A close call with Narak when they get pregnant that makes the males want to end it sooner. the females find out and want to protect their off spring. the fight could be a close call where maybe one of the females nearly dies but their mate saves them some how.
some ideas as you said you had none. i hope that they can help. i enjoy the story so far.
some ideas as you said you had none. i hope that they can help. i enjoy the story so far.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dat wuz soooooo good i mean the hole killin kikyo wuz a little drastic but i dont like de whore anyway! so right on! lol well PLEASE rite more it is just gettin 2 de good part! please hurri!
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