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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI IT'S ME I COULDN'T GET TO YOUR STORY ON THE A Single Spark Site, becasue it's been moved or somthing so I found it here It has more chapters anyway, oh no could Kouga know?!?!?!?! Awsome job Woot!!!
Kourui aka Aine Yukimura
Kourui aka Aine Yukimura
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow awsome chapter, Oh crap Kouga knows *Gulp* I wonder what kagomes gonna do now, I wonder how Inuaysha will react to it all? *SHiver* Awsome chpater I loved it, keep up the good work!!!
Kourui aka Aine Yukimura
Kourui aka Aine Yukimura
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow awsome chapter, Oh crap Kouga knows *Gulp* I wonder what kagomes gonna do now, I wonder how Inuaysha will react to it all? *SHiver* Awsome chpater I loved it, keep up the good work!!!
Kourui aka Aine Yukimura
Kourui aka Aine Yukimura
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH WOOT FINALLY AWSOME JO!B Ahhhh so sad I cryed all over my keybord, *Sniffle* Awsome job though, Oh know what are Kouga and Inuasyah gonna do now though *Gulp* Awsome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aine yukimura
Aine yukimura
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW awsome job lol, poor inuaysha I hpe his face doesn't stay that way ^______^ yeah Kouga finally took the hint...well with a little intimadating help from Sesshomarou that's is, Hmmm? Miroku knows doesn't he...or at least has an idea about the whold situation. Anyway Awsome chapter I loved it so much!!! WOOT!
Aine Yukimura
Aine Yukimura
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god i finally was able to read the last chapter so far and now i want to cry. poor kagome. She musnt be sad but happy! She is to have sesshomarus baby! i mean what joy! Though i understand why she fears inuyasha so ....but still yay! only things seem to be falling from here. Ill be waiting for the next chapter. Your a awesome writer. lol! this is the best story i have read so far other then one from keylala81 the story of the shinju on single spark. But yay i feel with joy! also i have rejistered to single spark so i will be getting my storys out. well continueing to love your creations
genia
genia
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, i finished it, and i love it, and don't at the same time.
it's so weird. i love the parts with sesshy and kag, but at the same time,
my heart breaks for inuyasha. i mean, he did in not so many words, choose kikyo,
but still.
i just don't know, i'm torn between it. and i think that means that you did a great job!!!
i'm curious about everyones reaction.
i think sesshy will be pleased, for the simple fact of his remark about her having to accept his mark in
order for her to become pregnant.
please continue at your own pace, i know how hard things can get,
and i look forward to your next update.
it's so weird. i love the parts with sesshy and kag, but at the same time,
my heart breaks for inuyasha. i mean, he did in not so many words, choose kikyo,
but still.
i just don't know, i'm torn between it. and i think that means that you did a great job!!!
i'm curious about everyones reaction.
i think sesshy will be pleased, for the simple fact of his remark about her having to accept his mark in
order for her to become pregnant.
please continue at your own pace, i know how hard things can get,
and i look forward to your next update.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and i can't wait until you update again but I understand being busy with college. I have to deal with the same thing.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story was the best i've read in YEARS!! you should realy continue writing ^_^
yours truly
Victorea Kellermann
Zelda_Heartless@yahoo.com
yours truly
Victorea Kellermann
Zelda_Heartless@yahoo.com
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was a little skeptical at first, but i really like it.
i'm curious about sesshy true intentions, but i think along the way, he has grown to care for her, maybe not love, but care.
i finished chpt 9, and now i must go to sleep, hence why i am reviewing one thing sthat have transpiered up to chpt 9 and not after.
i love inu and kags, but, i love sesshy..
and inu has always gone running after kikyo, so it's his own fault.
i do hope that the lust turns to love along the way.
i also hope that inu ends up happy..
it's hard to say everything, because then i would just be rambling.
the plot is original, well thought out, and well written.
therea re a few grammatical errors, some sentences that just don't flow right....
they don't sound right, ya know. like the words arent arranged right, and are hard to make sense of
there aren't many, but in a couple places i had to stop and reread a sentance, but then again, nothing major
but all those could be fixed by a beta or something.
anywho.. i really have enjoyed the story so far, and hopefully, i'll get to finish what you have written tomorrow.
keep up the good work
i'm curious about sesshy true intentions, but i think along the way, he has grown to care for her, maybe not love, but care.
i finished chpt 9, and now i must go to sleep, hence why i am reviewing one thing sthat have transpiered up to chpt 9 and not after.
i love inu and kags, but, i love sesshy..
and inu has always gone running after kikyo, so it's his own fault.
i do hope that the lust turns to love along the way.
i also hope that inu ends up happy..
it's hard to say everything, because then i would just be rambling.
the plot is original, well thought out, and well written.
therea re a few grammatical errors, some sentences that just don't flow right....
they don't sound right, ya know. like the words arent arranged right, and are hard to make sense of
there aren't many, but in a couple places i had to stop and reread a sentance, but then again, nothing major
but all those could be fixed by a beta or something.
anywho.. i really have enjoyed the story so far, and hopefully, i'll get to finish what you have written tomorrow.
keep up the good work