rate_review Reviews

This story is very good. all the bad senens were off the hook. The on thing that really go me dissopented was u did not put sesshoumaru's pov(point of view), but it was still good

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This is a fabulous read except for ONE thing. Kagome's fifteen AND pregnant! She's TOO young!!! The author even refers to it herself in the story... "Could she be a mother when she was still a child herself?" She's TOO young to be having sex!!! She's TOO young to be having a baby!!!

It has taken me absolutely forever to read this story, and here I am... absolutely left hanging. Is she going to tell her mother? How is she going to break it to everyone? And will Sesshoumaru make her stay when she comes to him rather then letting her have her own life? Gah. But I understand how university life truly is, and I'm a patient person. I just hope you don't forget this story. It's too good.

I love how you kept the plot; most writers just write the smut parts and mish-mash the plot until the only parts that make sense are the sex scenes. You keep the characters in-character for the situations presented to them, and all of the questions that Kagome asks herself are ones that I am thinking along with her. WHY? Why did he suddenly capture her and make her his that first day after so much had happened to make her think he hated her? I know you mentioned something along the lines of what he's wanted the whole time since the beginning... but it just doesn't ring a bell. What did he want? Power? To rule the Western lands? My memory escapes me. I literally cannot think for the life of me what Sesshoumaru has wanted this whole time in the anime/manga; he even says in your story that what he wanted before no longer matters... but he never SAYS what it was!! When you get the time, is there any way I could get you to email me to let me know? I'm very curious.

Great job! I'll look up your livejournal and befriend you. I'll be Shoomy2003.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON Im bored I have no stories to read :'( I love this one

PLEASE UPDATE SOON Im bored I have no stories to read :'( I love this one

Hmm. Or maybe Sesshoumaru couldn't smell that she was pregnant because of the poison haze? Or her own powers covering her scent? Or maybe he knew the night he marked her that she was in a fertile period. If so, I doubt his instincts would have allowed her out of his sight long enough to get poisoned. *sigh* Please update. The next chapter will be GREAT! Hmm, if InuYasha is insane enough to attack a pregrant female I wonder just how dirt low the act would be considered in Inu-Youkai society?

s;ldjgsldkjf. MORE. omfg. You cannot leave us HERE of all places! NON!

Wow oh my god I loved it, so full of passion and love and sadness and jy and oh my god that was awsome I can honostly say I believe that this is the best thing I have ever read, you should really go into a career for writting awsome job woot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Aine Yukimura

OH NO POOR KAGOME! yeah Sesshomarou saves her again! Oh I bet This is killing Sesshomarou, poor inuaysha he's all confused ^_^ Hmmm I wonder why Miroku was so protective of kagome...Interesting, anyway awsome chapter!!!


Aine yukimura

AHHHHHHHHHHHH HOW COULD YOU!!! No I wanna know what happens, Oh man what will Inuaysha do will Kagome tell them will he alreddy be able to tell? Oh my god it's driving me crazy! And What about Sesshomarou...*Gulp* Oh KAMI CONTINUE ASAP! Let me knowthe second you up-date onegai!!! E-mail me!!!!!!


Aine yukimura