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by CiraArana

person Shauna
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY!!! I had to re-read some of your past chapters to remember what I had forgotten, but after that I was a-ok. SO!! Everything's been worked out pretty much eh?? Oh man, if I were Kagome's mom I would FLIP! But then again, she's most likely not going to go back to see her eh? Hell, I would freak if I were pregnant, so Kagome's reaction was extremely plausable. So Sesshoumaru got with Kagome so they could create a powerful miko/demon, but since it's going to be a boy it'd be a priest/demon. hahahah!! It'd be hilarious if he accidentally exterminated himself. But Sesshoumaru didn't think his emotions would get entangled with this wild web of randy sexual excapades, now did he! Silly Demon, Emotions are for the Sexually Active!

I really really liked the way you described his reaction. The way you described his eyes... it was beautiful. Wonderful work. However, wouldn't there have been three heartbeats? Or wait, the baby still isn't that far along. Never mind.

Oh, and congrats on the tests!
person Silverstar871
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, another great chapter from our revered authoress! I absolutely loved this chapter! The interaction between Sesshomaru and Kagome was beautifully detailed right down to the dialogue and emotions. I thought that it was super sweet when Sesshomaru said his future son would be the heir to his throne. Wow! I've never actually felt such strong feeling coming from the characters before but you've written it so perfectly that the reader can actually sense the emotions well. It just blew me away!
Will the next chapter be the epilogue? Or are there more chapters?
Keep up the fabulous work! Us readers/reviewers are thoroughly loving it! ^__^
person Dizzy
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yah! sess knows about the baby! the widdle shnoogems!
person Deborah L.
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo - Hoo! It was great to read another chapter of "Passion!" ANd the parts with Kikyo were good, and a unique twist on things! Please update soon! btw, where can I read the Dragon's Prey sequel? Is it posted on aff, and I'm just brain dead for not realizing it? Do you have an updating notification service? If so, could you place me on it -- I think you are one of the better writers out there, and don't want to miss a story. My email is: Deborah_Lemieux5@msn.com . Thanks, and update soon!
person tamoyb
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have no words. I have been pining away for this chapter for what felt like years, I am now in a state of euphoria where I can barely remember my own name. It was just that perfect, why aren't you pubishing novels?
person DragonSpite
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And yet again, another beautifully written installment in the Passion series. I particularly loved this chapter because it was so philosophical, and dealt with matters of the heart and stabling the troubled mine. I have to admit, I was a little shocked Sesshomaru wanted to keep the baby even though it was somewhat hoped for. And I wonder, who would Kagome tell next? InuYasha and the rest of the group? Or does Kikyo know about the child and will tell the others before Kagome can herself? Such a complez plotline, I can't wait until the next one!
person tanesha
schedule March 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i love the story first of all and the plot and deatail are great.

what is going to happen in the next chapter? is kagome going to go back to sengoku jidaii and if she does what will sesshomaru say and do? will sess be angry because she's pregnant and disgusted that the child will be a hanyou or will he give one of those slow grins,that covers his eyes with his hair and he'll walk to kags slowly and take her into an embrace showing how proud he is and the pride that he takes in having her pregnant and it being his child and that no one else will be able to have kagome bear there children?

what about inu because i think that we all know him well enough to say that he'll be angry furiouse and all the rest. what will his reaction be? will inu except the fact that he chose kikyou over kagome a long time ago and that kagome is with someone else and that she is marked too and bearing that person a pup already and this i know he will take a long long long long while in excepting that the person is sesshomaru?

we all know that kouga will either challenge sesshomaru for kagome or either he will see scence and go to ayame and take for his mate finally? kouga will most likly challenge sesshomaru*sighs* he'll be killed or badly ingured afterwards.

i know that shippou will be a bit scared of sesshomaru and that he will mostly be happy if kagome is happy and being well protected. what about sango? how will she take this and she is a demon slayer and she has a dislike of demons but seems to be ok with kouga and shippou and she does have kirara with her and fights by her side?

i hope that kagome is able to call sesshomaru but how maybe through a mental link that they have so that kagome won't have to go all the way to the house of the moon to look for sesshomaru and so that she won't ingure or tire herself out because after all she is with child and kagome should become a pure white inu demoness,i know that she is fine the way she is but what about the pup it will be a hanyou and the heir to the western throne but demons don't accpet hanyou's and inuyasha is a living testiment to that hatred. the child will not be accepted by other youkai no matter what the race they will hate the pup simply because its a hanyou and maybe even try to kill it.

what about rin? i know that she'll be happy to have shippou as a playmate and she'll be happy that sesshomaru is happy and that he finally has a mate and that he isn't alone anymore or lonly anymore too.

update soon

ja ne
person Nova
schedule February 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I just read that:D My german sucks:D But I love Kagome/Miroku... There's all too little of those out there:) It was nice, all that I undertood from it ^^;
person Nova
schedule February 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, wrong fic:D I don't know how that happened:D Anyway, meaning the MiroKago obviously:) Even though, this one is very very nice too! Hope it has a happy ending:)
person SessLover
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, can u PLEASE update soon? ur leaving us all hangin' here! PLEASE!!! IM BEGGING U!!! THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!