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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love ur story! i couldn't stop reading it.. can't wait for the next chapter..please up date soon! i can't wait to see how sesshomaru acts with a pregant kagome>(morning sickness,Mood swings)plus living with him! ur a great writter and hope to read more of ur storys!! now PLEASE UPDATE bc i don't think i could take it any more i need to read the rest of the story!!!!/:o
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and I'm practically dying for the next chapter!!! I've gone back and reread this about 5 times. Chapter 14 was probably the angstiest and the one where I jumped for joy when Kagome said she was free and she would come to Sesshoumaru. The conversation between Kagome and the hell bitch, I mean Kikiyo was interesting. I kept yelling bitch (to Kikiyo) at my computer screen though. I think I'm going crazy. Sooo Please hurry up an post the next chapter. I can wait no longer. (I think I've become obsessed with Sesshoumaru)
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE NOW!!!!!!
I love the story and i want to know how it ends. so please update. And keep writing, i love the Sess/Kag pairing. its so cute and it fits in some sort of weird way.
And again UPDATE NOW or i will wish terrible things apon you. (and don't think i wont)
I love the story and i want to know how it ends. so please update. And keep writing, i love the Sess/Kag pairing. its so cute and it fits in some sort of weird way.
And again UPDATE NOW or i will wish terrible things apon you. (and don't think i wont)
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely wonderful fic; the passion, suspense, angst, and action make it absolutely wonderful. I am very anxious to see the reactions of her friends, particularly Inuyasha. I do hope that you do not cause him to become violent and hurt Kagome. He has no right to put a claim on her. I do think that the Sesshoumaru's choice would have been more believable had you expounded on Sesshoumaru's reasoning earlier on and in more detail. Perhaps we could see more of his POV? I do love the way that you have portrayed him though. He has not given up his facade even while being loving and gentle with Kagome. You did that very well and I am impressed.
I'm not certain that you have taken a peek at your fic lately, but the move must have caused errors. Would you mind reloading it? I only ask because this is the second time that I have read it and I will most likely do so again and again.
Off to check out another violent storm outside my home! Love storms.
Snowfall
I'm not certain that you have taken a peek at your fic lately, but the move must have caused errors. Would you mind reloading it? I only ask because this is the second time that I have read it and I will most likely do so again and again.
Off to check out another violent storm outside my home! Love storms.
Snowfall
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much. I'm glad you didn't forget it, I was worried. You are a brilliant writter.
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh I really like your story so far. I just got into Inuyasha fanfics and hadn't even thought of this pairing. I like it! I also love how your chapters are super long. I am kinda sad that I have read all the chapters up so far... but I hope to see another one soon. <3
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can't do this to me!!!!! You have to continue ASAP!!!! I want more of the love story!!
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your storys there soo good.So whens your next chapter ?I can not wait to read it.I'm glad you passed your exams by the way!!PLZ, PLZ UPDATE SOOOONN
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, after reading this chapter I am really happy. Nope rethink that. I am positivly giddy!! I was soooo worried at the end of the last chapter that her mother would find out and like, disown her or fill the well with cement or something. But the fact that you kept her in the dark added to the suspense of it all. One cudo for you my friend!!
But on that note, you probably should go back there and have her mother and family find out about her pregnancy. Or you could always do something like, after Inuyasha was done visiting Kikyo he went to the well and decided to see if Kagome had told her family what was wrong with her. And when he gets there Kagome's mom lets him read the letter and then he finds out, and decides to go back to the past and go ape on Kagome. Or something. I don't know, you are the author, and if the next chapter is as good as this one, that will be awesome!
Second, after reading your authors note about the clue about the childs gender, I decided to go back and read it. And I think I found it!! The test read that if the test was blue (boy), it was negative and that if it was red (girl), it was positive. And since we all knew that Kagome would be pregnant, (or atleast, I kinda figured it out) it has to be a girl! ^_^ A cute little girl with white hair and blue eyes... or something cute!! ^-^!!! And I was thinking, before I realized that it is highly likely to be a girl, that you should make Kagome have a girl just to tick Sesshoumaru off. I can just imagine it... it would be hilarious. But you get a cudo for that clue!!
Thirdly, I think that what Sesshoumaru wanted from the beginning was a way to make sure that the Western Lands stayed in his bloodline by him having a child. And if he died, the Western Lands would go to Inuyasha, which we all know he would absolutely hate. Atleast, that is my reasoning behind it.
And finally, I just want to praise you on this work of art that you call Passion. It is probably number three on my favorites list, number one being House of the Moon, and two being Chained to You, but only because those are done. I have tried to write stories before and heaven knows they sucked. And I am trying to make a comic right now, which is sadly not coming together ,so I know how hard it can sometimes be to create a story. You are just an amazing writer and I am truly honered to read what you have written. And I am not sucking up either. The way you write is captivating and I can't get enough of it. Sometimes, I just go to A Single Spark or here and just start reading your story for the fun of it. I tell you, it is one of the only stories that I have ever read that can not bore me by reading it again and again. And I know, I have probably read your story about 6 times over. Please, take as much time as you need to write the next chapter! I for one will definatly not complain! ^_^!!
Oh, I almost forgot, congragulations on passing your exams! I am getting my grades soon, so I hope I pass! *crosses fingers*
But on that note, you probably should go back there and have her mother and family find out about her pregnancy. Or you could always do something like, after Inuyasha was done visiting Kikyo he went to the well and decided to see if Kagome had told her family what was wrong with her. And when he gets there Kagome's mom lets him read the letter and then he finds out, and decides to go back to the past and go ape on Kagome. Or something. I don't know, you are the author, and if the next chapter is as good as this one, that will be awesome!
Second, after reading your authors note about the clue about the childs gender, I decided to go back and read it. And I think I found it!! The test read that if the test was blue (boy), it was negative and that if it was red (girl), it was positive. And since we all knew that Kagome would be pregnant, (or atleast, I kinda figured it out) it has to be a girl! ^_^ A cute little girl with white hair and blue eyes... or something cute!! ^-^!!! And I was thinking, before I realized that it is highly likely to be a girl, that you should make Kagome have a girl just to tick Sesshoumaru off. I can just imagine it... it would be hilarious. But you get a cudo for that clue!!
Thirdly, I think that what Sesshoumaru wanted from the beginning was a way to make sure that the Western Lands stayed in his bloodline by him having a child. And if he died, the Western Lands would go to Inuyasha, which we all know he would absolutely hate. Atleast, that is my reasoning behind it.
And finally, I just want to praise you on this work of art that you call Passion. It is probably number three on my favorites list, number one being House of the Moon, and two being Chained to You, but only because those are done. I have tried to write stories before and heaven knows they sucked. And I am trying to make a comic right now, which is sadly not coming together ,so I know how hard it can sometimes be to create a story. You are just an amazing writer and I am truly honered to read what you have written. And I am not sucking up either. The way you write is captivating and I can't get enough of it. Sometimes, I just go to A Single Spark or here and just start reading your story for the fun of it. I tell you, it is one of the only stories that I have ever read that can not bore me by reading it again and again. And I know, I have probably read your story about 6 times over. Please, take as much time as you need to write the next chapter! I for one will definatly not complain! ^_^!!
Oh, I almost forgot, congragulations on passing your exams! I am getting my grades soon, so I hope I pass! *crosses fingers*
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was AMAZING I just couldnt stop reading!! I waited till now to review because I couldnt stop reading. Im truely in love with this fanfic <3. I really hope you update sooon! Its getting so good ^_^