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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Look, I know Inuyasha has big time mis-givings about what he smelled. I mean come on, there's no hiding that smell. Not even from humans. Passion can give you grief. You go! Keep writing, this was good.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm feaky!
let's see if he only used her or if there was more.
let's see if he only used her or if there was more.
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Don't be so hard on yourself. You shouldn't care about what -they- (points at the audience) want, care about what you want. Sure, the audience is important, I won't lie. But they shouldn't dictate how the story goes... that's your job. And your muse's job (glares at my own muse standing behind me). I really liked it, and I can't wait for the next chapter... if you write one, if not, that's cool too. Anyways, I just wanted to say that I liked it a lot. Keep writing!
Levii ^_^
Levii ^_^
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I have to ask. Is Kagome going to see Sesshomaru again? Is she going to have his child? Why did he save her then have his why with her? I thought he hated her. Please get the next chapter out soon. I think Inu Yasha might find out what happend soon don't you? SMILE ^_~