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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U MUST UPDATE SOON, "K"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aahhhhh
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an amazing fanfic!!!! Full of juicy Lemons!!! Keep on writing or I'll hunt you down and...well I don't know what I'd do but if you don't update then you'll find out!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story!... please update soon!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I love the way Shippo had to cover for Kagome at the end of chap. 8 with the soap thing.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still marvelous, as always. Wow.
Please add me to that mailing list. I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!! awanderingjedi@aol.com
Please add me to that mailing list. I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!! awanderingjedi@aol.com
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!... this is great!... please update really soon... i can't wait.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAIL!!!!!!!! god i love your work. i do believe it is much much much better than work by a long shot. please keep writing, UPDATE quickly, I want to see some more smut and fightage....when is seshomaru gonna come in a fight for his gal? *squeals and gets dirty looks from co-workers* update!!!!! ps...thanks for the email
much love
Eddie
much love
Eddie
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wish u would finish the story....it was VERY good...i hope that in the future u consider a career in writing.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good lemon, but severe OOCness and departure from canon. Does anyone bother to read the manga? Of course, actual canon would spoil your fic, such as that InuYasha does love Kagome and that his feelings toward Kikyou are some affection and demands of obligation and honor rather than love. Even apart from the manga, does anyone truly believe that InuYasha would choose an undead who smells of the grave (wonderful perfume for his sensitive nose), whose own sister says she is dead, talks about taking him to hell with her, and couldn't have children in any event.
I once made up a list of overused plots and cliches for S/K fics. You managed to avoid the overused plots, but you tagged several of the cliches. Is a bit of originality too much to ask?
Taking the fic as given, at some point InuYasha should slap Sango around for automatically taking Kagome's side regardless of circumstances. When the facts come out, he should grind her face in the fact that she defended Kagome when Kagome was lying and ignoring InuYasha's attempts to find out the truth. Her behavior is so one-sided that I don't see how InuYasha can trust her.
I once made up a list of overused plots and cliches for S/K fics. You managed to avoid the overused plots, but you tagged several of the cliches. Is a bit of originality too much to ask?
Taking the fic as given, at some point InuYasha should slap Sango around for automatically taking Kagome's side regardless of circumstances. When the facts come out, he should grind her face in the fact that she defended Kagome when Kagome was lying and ignoring InuYasha's attempts to find out the truth. Her behavior is so one-sided that I don't see how InuYasha can trust her.