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for Passion

by CiraArana

person fracture
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU! IN A NONE STALKER I LOVE UR STORIES WAY! super_freaky0@hotmail.com
person Jen
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Another great chapter wonderfully written! Oh Kouga is in for a BIG surprise....!!!! Please continue I cant wait!!!
person Darkflameangel
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story full of smutty goodness....seriously i love the story so far and i am currently trying to figure out what exactly our dear gorgeous sexsho...whooops i mean Sesshoumaru is up too...hmmm....if you are still needing a beta..i might be able to help you with that..if not i shall enjoy the story either way. i bow to the queen of lemons...(maybe not the queen, but you are certainly royalty lol) serious keep up the good work and update soon. i look forward to how terribly kouga is going to stick his foot in his mouth this time.
Ja ne~
DFA
person KiTsUnEoOkAmI
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, liking the story, hope to see an update soon. Keep up the great work and sorry for such a short review.
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now I see why you were a winner--your lemons are amazing. You weren't afraid to put that lemon out there right away, were you? I was pleased with that--and you made the sudden intimacy work. I thought the rest of the story was great as well. I loved the scene where Sesshoumaru was asking her to "stay". It is also interesting seeing things from both Kag and Sess's POV, such as when he needed some space to get himself under control, while she was thinking he was angry at her. And, the scenes where the two meet (and have to hide their feelings) in front of Inuyasha and the gang were terrif too. Kouga getting jealous was pretty funny--he doesn't know what he's in for, does he? Impressed by your story and looking forward to the next update!
person keket
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really have enjoyed your story so far! I really hope you continue on. I wonder what Sesshomaru is planning and why he wants Kagome so much!
person catwoman316
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I got all worked up while reading the lemons *g* I like the story very much! Kagome should tell everyone the truth, that would set her free. Will she realize that she loves Sess in the next chapter? I hope she does, cause they belong together!
person Weezer chi (ah curse it i forgot to log in again)
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! OMG your story is sooooooooo wonderful! Beats mine, lol. Mine's moving rather slowly... oh well. Please don't stop writing! Oh, could you put me on your mailing list?
CreamCheezDANIsh@gmail.com

it would be much appreciated! ^_^_^_^_^
Ah! It's so good! ( gotta love the lemons ^_~ )

your new fan,
¡~!!DANIsh!!~¡
PS- it's spelled Tetsusaiga, not Tessaiga... lol. (the 'su' is silent though)
<3
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
listen this is a great fic and i think that you should go a head and write more for i like the story and put some more fuck seens
person LBH
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good writing, in fact, some of the best I've ever read. Keep up the good work, and please, keep up the long chapters, it is a nic e change of pace.