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for Passion

by CiraArana

person sharris8
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story! It drew me in like a fish on a hook with the first chapter! I do believe you have set your fic apart from the other with this story line...Keep up the storytelling!

ps I'd like to know when you post the next chapters!


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person bd84
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally a mark!!! :D i adore this story! its quite good! please update again soon!! i want to see InuYasha and Kogas reaction to kagomes mark!!
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god.

your best yet.

oh my Fucking god.

much love from a very stunned and utterly spellbound-
Eddie
person gretel_chan
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a cliffhanger! I'm so glad you updated, and I can't wait to see how you resolve this. I've really enjoyed this fic so far. Thanks :).
person Arenyth
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is by far the best lemon I've ever read!

One thing: If you have a concussion, you must not go to sleep, especially not right afterwards. It can mean death. So having Miroku rest right after she diagnosed him was a horrible mistake.

You have a few grammar mistakes, but other than that it is an utter joy to read!
person Subaru
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stupid, stupid Kagome. Why does she always put her obligations in front of what SHE want? I really hope you make this, so Sesshy and Kag get together in the end and live happly ever after. Well cant find out until you update, so update soon please.
person ladyize
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, yes, i do believe this last chapter was worth the wait. Now, I ask that you please UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. The wait is killing me, my poor Sesshomaru is hurt. FIX HIM. Oh and if its not to much to ask I would like to be on your mailing list as well. Thank you

P.S For my sanity i ask that you update as quickly as possible
person ladyize
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry. I forgot to mention that I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FIC

Ja Ne
person kat
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is so great! i love Sesshomaru's character here. Please continue, I can't wait for her friends' reactions in the morning.
person Earth Neko
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh it was so great! I haven't reveiwed the first 8 chapters becasue, I could not.. I had go on on to the next chapter. I started reading this series about 2 days ago. My sister had been reading it, and had told me it was great! So I started it and was automatically sucked in. LOL Ok I will tell you had suductive this story is. I had being reading it for a day and I had finished the first 3 chapters, then the next day I read the 4th and 5th chapters and was happy the chapters kept coming! The n I woke up the thrid day and went outside to let the dogs out and felt how cool it was, for the last couple of months it has been incredalby hot. But that day it was rare adn I was really tempted to frolik all day out in the woods. But then I was thinking about story and toadlly forgot about the once in a summer coolness day. I missed the whole day by reading the last 4 chapters of the story. They were great but know I am happy becasue to day is also cool but not as. I loved it! you are a great writer! Keep up the great work! I hope to see way more suductive chapters as I have already!
Peace & Love,
Earth Neko