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for Passion

by CiraArana

person synapse
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderfully rafted. please finnish it, soon.
person synapse
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderfully crafted. please finnish it, soon.
person kruemel
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a truly wonderful story. I can't wait for the next update - and for more lemon (you are really talented in writing that stuff!)
person Lita
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome, but she should have thought before she spoke (like most of us should but never do). Shesshoumaru is truely possesive (well he is a dog demon) and thats a good thing.. sometimes. I cannot wait for the next chapter Cira! I waited for what seems like forever for this one, and it was spectacular. Very nice job! I thought that she might end up with Inuyasha but then she mates with Shesshoumaru (this is a Sess/Kag fanfic so duh Lita)

What a ride of emotions. Keep it up! ^^
person Tabitha
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! This story is fantastic. I can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work. I love it.
person draegonfire
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story so far. I'd have to admit that Kagome should've worded things a bit differently when she asked Sesshomaru not to make her leave Inuyasha. I sincerely hope he didn't leave her for good. Although I'm thinking it'll be a while before she sees him again. I'm wondering if he's going to keep his promise to her now and still protect her. I hope so. He understood before he marked her that she had a duty to perform, I don't see why being officially mated would change that.
person lum
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries with Kagome* I found this story to be riveting, well-thought out, and beautifully written. You take the time to explain your characters their reasons for their actions. That's pretty rare in Fan Fiction. I think that the reason Kagome was so quick to jump his bones the first time was because she almost died, and perhaps subconsciously she realized that she had barely experienced all that life had to offer (including sex with incredibly hunky Sesshoumaru). I hope you get another chapter up soon, I think I'll die if you don't. *hands you chocolate chip cookies for a job well done*
person Rin-chan
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..CiraArana!! I've just read the "i do" chapter, and i think it was the best!!! They've talked so much and that was a new thing, but the end...it is so very emotional ,sad,happy at the same time..i thought that Kagome could have been rip in pieces from the inside...i must say, that "passion" is the best fanfic out there!!
I hope you'll continue soon!!!
From Hungary
person tash922
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is to good to be true i love it ^___^ i wonderful
it so sad poor kagome it gotta be hard to shove both feet into your mouth lol ^-^
i love it i can't wait to find out was happens next
i hope sess and kagome work thing out
keep update and soon ^_-
person hatami
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good please update soon and do tell me when you do

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