rate_review Reviews

omg miroku must know he may be a perver put he is pretty brite i love this story i look in every day hopiing that there is a new chap updated its passsions is soooo hot n steamy update soon if u can i cant wait to read more

thanks for updating your story! i was worried that it would just be dropped off, its a great story and i love the plot. keep writting!

when are u going to update? u still have fans eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and we want more!

I love your story. I hope you continue to write, and finish it.

i love this story! i couldnt keep my eyes off of it... i love it sooo much..... its sooooo good

nooooooooooo its ended!!!!!!!!!

Wow.... your amazing... please keep updateing!!!!! I cant wait

The last chapter is not one of your best ones. I feel like the summit of all problems should be there, and not a resoulution. The beggining of the chapter was good, I had thought that Kouga had fallen asleep for a bigger problem. When I think of this chapter, and then think of the rest of the story, it feels like this chapter dosen't belong here. My suggestion would be to not ruch the ending. I felt like I was being hammered over my head with a soulution. Chapter eight was good, I felt like I was part of the story, someone watching all of this happening, then the next chapter came. All of a sudden I was excluded, and thrown out of the story. I should be in the ending, not hearing this from someone that was there because I was watching monday night football or something like that.

=D...... since the first chapter, it got me hooked! no.. not hooked, ADDICTED! it's gonna be torture for me if you don't update soon.... T.T

Love the story so far ^_^ and I want more btw :D sorry I suck at reviews...