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for Passion

by CiraArana

person ldyneptune
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, please finish it, and then I will read the rest of it lol...........
person abheff
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you fic. Can't wait until you update again!! I wish there was a way we could be notified when you do. But I will keep watching. Keep up the great work.
person Heather
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far this stroy has been fantastic. I really can't wait to read more of your story. Keep it up the good work.

thanks

Heather
person dizzy
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet another great chapter, congrats! i hope this isnt the end of your story though...
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
to the person up top who complained about the know and now check your spelling. thats not how you spell retarded. some people
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon.
person Kure-ji-chan429
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi again!!! Just wanted to say that your chapters are auwsome except now my neck hurts from stairing up at the computer sceen -_-
person Kagayaku
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I love it! ^^ You're very good with detail and the plot is great...not to mention unique. Some of the plots etc... are getting overused so I really enjoyed it. Please update again soon!!

Constructive Critisim: Just a note...I noticed you used the word "sobbed/sob" a lot...you might try to find a couple other words to use instead or else it gets overused...^^ just a thought...I still love the story though....update soon! =) - Kagayaku
person gabby
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg i love it so much
i love FULFFY!!!!!!
please email me when the next chapter is out thank u

gabby
person SlipKnoTpUnK
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SO REATRDED DO YOU EVEN KNOW HOW TO SPELL NOW YOU SPELL IT THE WRONG WAY

KNOW = I KNOW THAT
NOW = RIGHT NOW


DO YOU GET THE DIFFRIENCE AND IF YOU DO KNOW THIS INFORMATION YOU DONT KNOW HOW TO MAKE SENCE

BAKA NIKO