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for Passion

by CiraArana

person Anime sweetie
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please Update soon!!
person Snowfall
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story and though I think that there was a bit much in the contemplation department, the end made it worth it. How heartrendingly sweet! How mystcal and magical. When will she allow the moon to be openly displayed for all to see? I think it's time that she made a decision. Of course, I'm impatient sometimes. Well, I'm enjoying the fic very much and anxiously await your next update.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person MizuOnna
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very well written, and I'm truly eager to see how everything will turn out in the end. Keep up the good work! :)
person ivorycoral
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Blink, Blink* I think I'm gonna pass out from just reading this. Have you taken any writing classes? If not they this must all be natural talent and a lot of it! Hell, I recognize that I'M not nearly this good at writing! I love the wealth of detail and the way you display the characters's actions and thought processes. It's impressive, for lack of better phrasing. Keep writing so all us adoring fans can keep reading

Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses
ivorycoral
person Metis
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very nice. Thank you for updating. Don't stay away too long! Luck on your exams, and nice touch with the crescent moon. Is it facing the same way as his (waning) or opposite (waxing)? I look forward to the next chapter. Don't be a stranger! ~_^
person \"George\"
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, it's awsome. I can't wait until the next chapter to see what happens. I love Sesshy and Kagome together. Well keep up the great work.
person Sintar
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWW so sweet!!! So glad to see you updated. Looks like I'll be checking you out on here considering some mystery has befallen our adored Single Spark, boohoo :( Update again soon!

~Sintar
person DeadlyFlameDemon
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!
person ME!
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I've ever read! Keep up the good work and update soon!
person A. King
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is beautifully written. It's descriptive, the chapters are just the right length, and this is one fanfiction that I would recommend to any fan of a Sesshoumaru/Kagome Romance.

1.I get a very good mental picture from this.
2.Your English is PERFECT. You use the words in the correct context.

This work is professional. If you write anything, I would strongly suggest getting it published.

5 out of 5.