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for Passion

by CiraArana

person Snowfall
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals!* Awesome chappie! Sess to the rescue! Poor ignorant hanyou, cold yet needy Sesshoumaru, sick Kagome (pregnant perchance?), why the concern from Miroku? Does he know that she may be pregnant? At least, Sango and Shippou aren't so bad off. *sighs for Kagome* She needs to fess up and gain the support of her friends. But, it does seem unlikely. Poor Sess, deprived and silenced by a promise. *sigh* So good and angsty. Well written, great battle scene.

Anxiously await next chappie.

Snowfall
person henrietta
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, I'm a long time in reading this chapter (and reviewing)! It was lovely - so full of warm fuzziness. I thought you did an excellent job with bringing Kagome to the realization that what she truly felt was love. Her talk with her friends really made me giggle. The ending was terrific - loved your description of Sesshoumaru's aura. Great writing!
person Flightoffancy
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story positively blew me away. You are an incredible writer. Your story had me on the edge of my seat and I have done nothing for the past two days but read. You kept the characters true, the storyline imaginative and you never lost track of the thread, and your "lemons" were an almost spiritualy breathtaking experience. I praise your very soul that you did not make any of them whiney or childish. Extremely well done. Thank you, Thank you, thank you. Can't wait for more.
person Metis
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Maybe Sesshoumaru can cure Kohaku with Tensaiga. Anyway, UPDATE PLEASE!!! I can't take the supenders!
person demonschild
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U most update soon, "OK"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Silver
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow......Just spent the past...I dunno...8 or 9 hourse reading this.....Amazing! Simply amazing!
Please...I beg of thee.....UPDATE!...*twitches slightly* In all seriousness I love this story...alot...
I love stories where I can feel the emotions of the characters...This one has that needed spark!!
Keep up the simply amazing work! ~Silver~
person Lady Reko
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!
person Judy
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVD THIS STORY MAKE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:) :)
person kinoko *not signed in*
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story that I've been reading since I stumbled upon it, taking in two or three chapters a day, as well as in between my classes at college. I really love the detail you put into your words as well as the emotion you seem to directly transfer into every situation you put the characters in. Good work, please continue and please let me know when the next chapter is posted. -kinoko
person risa
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo hot and intense. Kami they are a sexy couple. More please:)